My Words Often Fall On Deaf Ears
Confused Leave U in Left Field
Spinning Round In Circles Like A Top
All Cause Ya Dome Got Rocked
Cause In Secret My CD U Copped
U My Enemy Ain't Want No One To Know
Dat U Was Secretly Studyin My Flow
U'd Bite My Rhymes,You'd Stoop Dat Low?
So One Night Me And My Crew, It Was Like Fo'(Four)
Crept Up Ya Front Steps Knocked On Da Do'
U Opened It We Knocked Yo Ass To The Flo'
After A Few Hours U Ain't Want No Mo'
But U Needed To Be Taught A Lesson
And So We Brought Out Da AK-47
6 To The Bed,5 To The Legs, Totallin Eleven Shots
U Want Do Dis No More Cause ya Body Got Rocked
No FingerPrints, No Evidence,We Got Off Scott Free
Next Time You'll Think Before You Fuck Wit Me...........

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L-A-T

Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics In Holy Water No Wonder Dey Tryna Hold Me Under Longer
-Eminem "Renegade"

Dat Gurl Wit Da Vicious Flows And Tight Thighs
Niggas Wanna Sign Her And Make Her Dey Wife
-Love And Tears LAT

bit elementary d"ya not think.?

.it was ok...not bad

very elementary

basic wordplay and shit
a nice structure givin a gud flow but still too basic

get more complex and u'll get better feedback
overall 6/10

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yea just a little bit basic, just elivate a lil bit, n u be fine. P{eace.

it was ok but not top notch shawtie i'm not hatin but get ur game up