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Rascal 5 71.43%
PoTeNtIaL 2 28.57%
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Old 06-15-04, 01:59 AM   #16
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Potential gets my vote- he had great flow great punches and while he accomplished all that he was still humorous

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Old 06-15-04, 12:18 PM   #17
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thankz for the votez guyz but try ta explain better plez...lol...this bitch disqualifyin all mah votes......ill hit up ya battlez latta...pz
 
Old 06-16-04, 05:20 PM   #18
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This is a very good battle, and very close.

Flow: Rascal. His flow was just a little bit better here. It was close, but rascal get's this.

Meta's: I think this is a draw here. Both people came with good one's, but both had one's that don't make any sense either (rascal's fly one, and potential's muffin thing. Never heard of the english being called muffins before...).

Multies: Both lacking really.

Wordplay: Potential. His wordplay was funnier. That nail line was very good.

Punches: I'm afraid rascal got this here. Although potential's stuff was very good, it was all nicely worded work that has been frequently played. Rascal's stuff was more original, and that's what i feel hip hop lacks. Rascal's stuff was equal, and more original, and that's what took it.

Overall: Rascal. His originality took it, but barely. Potential should work on being more original, and rascal should work on a little better wordplay.
 
Old 06-20-04, 12:58 PM   #19
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potential took this battle. it was close but potential had better lyrics and punches. cant actually vote yet i dont have enough posts but

vote- potential
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Old 06-20-04, 06:46 PM   #20
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ima have to go wit rascal, cuz his shit flowed better, an made sense, i didn really kno wut potential was talkn bout, maybe im jus slow, but to me rascal came harda, but good job to both of yall.

vote rascal

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Old 06-20-04, 07:14 PM   #21
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Old 06-20-04, 07:25 PM   #22
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Oprner, Closer, Flow, Wordplay, PUnches= Potential

he merked you his verse was tight it had alot of good punches. He flipped soem of your stuff

Potential really has pontential

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Old 06-22-04, 08:27 AM   #23
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opener:rascal, his punch hit harder
closer:rascal, his punch hit harder
personals:both
metas:neither
multis:neither

vote rascal

now this shit is how it was in tha votin thread on how ur suppose to do it, so if it gets dq'ed again, o fuckn well. now return tha favor
 
Old 06-22-04, 09:10 AM   #24
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overall rascal had the better verse.i liked the fly line and u used more complexity and harder punches in ur verse.potential ur verse was good but weaker and u need to work on harder punches and makin ur verses sound better the flow wastn bad jus cut down on word uses

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Old 06-22-04, 09:49 AM   #25
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This battle sucked, but...

Rascal: You came wittier even though it wasn't a very strong verse. Decent punchlines, it was pretty ehh... But enough. Come with better wordplay and personals. Keep elevatin'.

Potential: Your verse was bad as well. You had concepts, but they were unfounded. I mean, it's not like Rascal said Alicia's my girlfriend, so why mention that? Your verse was witty, but not personal enough, which is important in text battling. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Rascal
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Old 06-22-04, 10:14 AM   #26
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flow-tie
structure-rascal
punches-potent
metas-potent
personals-potent

overallotent (came hard in this battle)

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Old 06-23-04, 12:18 AM   #27
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Quote:
Originally Posted by gotaasswhoopin4U
Openerotential....although i never seen it, he explained it and it came out to be a nice personal
Closer:rascal....nice safe closer, i didnt kno wut potential really meant
Punchesotential....he had ones that hit harder....like the opener, and that alicia silverstone one....rascal didnt really have ones that hit hard
Flowotential....the rhymes hit at every note....not many flaws
Vote = Potential, Had An All Around Better Verse Than Rascal, Harder Hittin Punches, And His Flowed Better, Rascal Had Some Too, But None Of Them Hit Hard, All Kind Of Weak

now its explained........
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Old 06-23-04, 12:20 AM   #28
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rascal wins because he is better.

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Old 06-23-04, 10:26 AM   #29
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Old 06-23-04, 05:17 PM   #30
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Breack down for potential:

Garbage dump just-in, cuz he got his verse-in
His last avy shocked the crowd...his moms a person?
dont get it 5/10
"Bakin" this muffin before this faggot kan "fill his nooks"
Never get signed...even got blanks in ya autograph books
decent punch 7/10
And thinkin ya got game wit pixta's?den i got much to teach ya
"high of silver gamblin" and you'd never have a chance wit Alicia
that was an old punch...5/10
His blood im spillin, wack fucker would never have skill n
Shiet if i "filmed him in action" he'd never be verbally killin
stupid punch 6/10
Buyin a "value meal at mcDonalds" the only time he'd ever mac
damn even if his dick was a "silver spike" he'd never "nail in" a "track"
good fincher 8/10

Breack down rascal:

this flyweight called for a Vet so im quick to accept,
i wanted a heavy wait battle but the radar red "noob cumin direct".
hahaha good opener 8/10
**cough cough** is that you?you ill? hmm No i hear u weezin,
is it a sickining illness? or is it from me givin you that lyrical beatin.
played and old 5/10
little faggot..this sites for talent..you'll never get by,
got a wasp on his jumper...so he thaught he was fly.
ok word play 7/10
use a bit of slang damn Potential you realy suckie,
tought he was bad as on a day off decidin to play hookie.
no much of a punch 5/10
I have this bitch fallin apart.. like he suffers from lepracy,
your undefeated streak is over Rascal's the enin of your legacy.
ok closer 7/10


flow:rascal
structuerotential
punches:rascal
personals:rascal

last thoughs....I think that overall rascal had a better verse then potenial...

v-rascal
 
 


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