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Old 06-25-04, 11:20 PM   #1
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Exclamation one of Arrest Tracks-Hit the Beat

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Chrous- Hit the beat, roll the Tape, u ALReady to Know/
Give me a hook and a beat and Iam ready to Flow/
Drop a Chorus on your Ass and Iam ready to go/
Give me a mike and a tape, and iam doing it in the studio/

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nigga,roll the tape, give me a beat/
watch your feet/
when you step into my ryhmes/
that's lyrical like mines/
on the front of my rap book I should have caution signs/
When I spit line for line/
it a feelin in my bones, to my spine/
to my mine/
I spit more heat, then nigga got on they radiator's in the winter time/
I walk around with the chills/
that why my flow is so ILL/
when i hit the beat, roll the tape, give me a mike/
go in the studio, and iam sure to be tight/
in the studio to the early morn, to the night/
you know the type of lyric i write nonstop rap music/
so nigga don't confuse/
yall know how i do's it/
It just how i get down with this rap Music/
I never cheat never face defeat, the only way yall can beat me if yall cheat/
yall nigga's know when i hit the beat/

Chorus- Hit the beat, roll the Tape, u ALReady to Know/
Give me a hook and a beat and Iam ready to Flow/
Drop a Chrous on your Ass and Iam ready to go/
Give me a mike and a tape, and iam doing it in the studio/

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iam back again, rippin the beat/
da boy striaght from the Chi, that were i roll the tape, spit my flow/
like MeP Bleek nigga Everythings a go/
when i get on the beat , blow back like dro/
you know how i go/
who can bring a hotter flow/
put on a hotter show/
ryhme for ryhme/
for every punch line/
for every dish/
the flow is so vishious/
it the sickest, Like/
everybody want my flow, like a pare of mike's/
i can see through yall clear like sprite/
on this flow yall nigga's is migits, yall know were near my height/
and that just with the flow/
my flow mix in with the beat, like hypnotic and Hino/
and yall nigga can't see me in the studio/ and that most of yall hit the chorus
now..

Chorus- Hit the beat, roll the Tape, u ALReady to Know/
Give me a hook and a beat and Iam ready to Flow/
Drop a Chrous on your Ass and Iam ready to go/
Give me a mike and a tape, and iam doing it in the studio/

yea that one of my latest track from Arrest holla back
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Old 06-25-04, 11:23 PM   #2
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yo get more words in their each line is too short and when it's not short
the syllable count isn't close.............. work on dat!

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Old 06-25-04, 11:23 PM   #3
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Eh i didnt like the structure of it and it took me awhile to read , but keep going
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Old 06-25-04, 11:28 PM   #4
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a thank for the advice yall
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