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06-25-04, 11:20 PM | #1 | |||||||
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one of Arrest Tracks-Hit the Beat
IP: B48D C7D5
Chrous- Hit the beat, roll the Tape, u ALReady to Know/
Give me a hook and a beat and Iam ready to Flow/ Drop a Chorus on your Ass and Iam ready to go/ Give me a mike and a tape, and iam doing it in the studio/ Verse1 nigga,roll the tape, give me a beat/ watch your feet/ when you step into my ryhmes/ that's lyrical like mines/ on the front of my rap book I should have caution signs/ When I spit line for line/ it a feelin in my bones, to my spine/ to my mine/ I spit more heat, then nigga got on they radiator's in the winter time/ I walk around with the chills/ that why my flow is so ILL/ when i hit the beat, roll the tape, give me a mike/ go in the studio, and iam sure to be tight/ in the studio to the early morn, to the night/ you know the type of lyric i write nonstop rap music/ so nigga don't confuse/ yall know how i do's it/ It just how i get down with this rap Music/ I never cheat never face defeat, the only way yall can beat me if yall cheat/ yall nigga's know when i hit the beat/ Chorus- Hit the beat, roll the Tape, u ALReady to Know/ Give me a hook and a beat and Iam ready to Flow/ Drop a Chrous on your Ass and Iam ready to go/ Give me a mike and a tape, and iam doing it in the studio/ Verse2 iam back again, rippin the beat/ da boy striaght from the Chi, that were i roll the tape, spit my flow/ like MeP Bleek nigga Everythings a go/ when i get on the beat , blow back like dro/ you know how i go/ who can bring a hotter flow/ put on a hotter show/ ryhme for ryhme/ for every punch line/ for every dish/ the flow is so vishious/ it the sickest, Like/ everybody want my flow, like a pare of mike's/ i can see through yall clear like sprite/ on this flow yall nigga's is migits, yall know were near my height/ and that just with the flow/ my flow mix in with the beat, like hypnotic and Hino/ and yall nigga can't see me in the studio/ and that most of yall hit the chorus now.. Chorus- Hit the beat, roll the Tape, u ALReady to Know/ Give me a hook and a beat and Iam ready to Flow/ Drop a Chrous on your Ass and Iam ready to go/ Give me a mike and a tape, and iam doing it in the studio/ yea that one of my latest track from Arrest holla back
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maybe u don't know, but on the mike iam the man/half of yall nigga gas up like nitrogencan/tha boy with tha 360 waves and a fade/killin in this game, like dywane wade/yall know my goals/iam in the hood like pot holes/ fucka |
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06-25-04, 11:23 PM | #2 | ||||||
Umm...Yeah
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IP: 5043 32F4
yo get more words in their each line is too short and when it's not short the syllable count isn't close.............. work on dat! ~I.S~
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06-25-04, 11:23 PM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Eh i didnt like the structure of it and it took me awhile to read , but keep going
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06-25-04, 11:28 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: B48D C7D5
a thank for the advice yall
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maybe u don't know, but on the mike iam the man/half of yall nigga gas up like nitrogencan/tha boy with tha 360 waves and a fade/killin in this game, like dywane wade/yall know my goals/iam in the hood like pot holes/ fucka |
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