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state capitol 6 66.67%
e-dubz 3 33.33%
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Old 06-26-04, 08:43 PM   #16
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Old 06-26-04, 11:21 PM   #17
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aight dubz great flow.capitol sounded liek some prewrites in there thats never good no matter how funny they are. dubz great opener wit a really good flow.punches were good specially the maze one.jus try not to use the word gay cause that weakens watever the punch is cause gay is jus played out.capitol not bad flow.needed some work wit unches use more personals. and come straonger wit punches.dubz had better punches and flow so i vote for him

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Old 06-27-04, 01:31 PM   #18
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wtf..dis is bullshyt, wutever uppin
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Old 06-27-04, 05:14 PM   #19
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Old 06-27-04, 05:56 PM   #20
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ight ight ima break it down


wordplay: e
punches: tie
flow: capitol
metas: E
vocab:capitol
personal: capitol



capitol jus made it more personal and thats what these battles is about
good shit da both of ya

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Old 06-27-04, 06:04 PM   #21
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one of the major reasons for y i am gong to be picking against e dub is because ! i seen some bitten ass lines in his rhymes recycled ! that is the biggest no no ! i just battle a guy that used the sam type of line on me ????? not kewl so it goes down like this iight.. judgeing 1-5 1 being wackest ever 5 being illiest in exzistance!! l0l

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originality:1
flow:3
punches:2
overall:2

State CapiTol

originality:3
flow:3
punches:3
overall:3

vote=State CapiTol your flow was average but i feel that you did better over all peace!

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Old 06-27-04, 06:18 PM   #22
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damn this was a very hard battle to call but ima have to go with state on this he had reall good verse .... e-dubz your verse was decent but you really didnt have any personals .. you basicall had structure and alittle bit of punchlines...

as for edubz you had nice punchlines that hit hard and were really sticken and... nice personals.....but overall it was very close it was maybe on of the closed battles ive seen ... but i gotta give this one to state sorry.. e-dubz

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Old 06-27-04, 06:28 PM   #23
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Old 06-27-04, 08:17 PM   #24
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uppin..look at all da unexplained vote..cud it b d/r?
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Old 06-27-04, 11:16 PM   #25
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E-dubz: Well This Was One Nice Drop From You Best I've Seen From
You Yet Wordplay Was Really Hitting In This One ~big Up~ Punches
Were Really Hard......flow Was There As Well Best Flow I've Seen
From You...vocab Was Good......originality Was Aight Not The Best
Tho.......

Overall: 7.8/10

State Capitol: Whoa That Was St8 Crazy Most Of It Was Fire
Cept For The Opener It Was Just Average......flow Was Exactly
The Same As Dubz To Me.........punches Hit Hard Nice Job There....
Vocab Was There Also Like E.d. Originality To Me Was Better
In Your Drop So That Takes The Battle 4 U

Overall: 8/10

Vote Goes To: S.c.

Sorry For Taking So Long To Vote Formatted Computer And It's
Fucked Up Right Now Ya Know.

~big Up~ To Both Sides For Real
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Old 06-27-04, 11:39 PM   #26
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aiight here it iz.. e dubz u did aiight but wasnt good enuf to take out capitol. capitol showed some potential there, was n aiight battle but capitol took it. better punches and metaz and flow. e dubz u were aiight too but i think u fell off a bit in tha middle, keep tha hard punches going. e had a good opener but i think fell off from that. capitol had a consistent verse, stayed strong tha whole way through and hit hard. thats y im voting for capitol
vote = state capitol

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Old 06-28-04, 05:09 AM   #27
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open: State, first line got me focussed immediately
close: E-Dubz nice closer
personals: State the way u played those, original...
vocab: State vocab was slightly better but it's close
punches: both both nice punches
flow: both, flow was tight with both

win:close one but State takes it...E-Dubz did good job but State Capitol showed his skillz,was on fire!
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Old 06-28-04, 11:14 AM   #28
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this battle was aight....but my vote gotsta go to e-dubz. his punches were clearer and his style was more constant and it just flowed a lot better. his lines was jus hittin harder. i have no beef at all.

ur best line i think:
his spits couldnt be path-Illogical if he lost his way-in-a-maze 8.9/10
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state capitol...i was feelin ya in our battle homie but i think your rhymes were too simple in this one. i think dubz had this edged over you with his structure. it flowed easily

ur best line i think:
you couldn't stack doe even if you worked at the bakery....8/10
decent^

my vote/ dubz
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Old 06-28-04, 12:50 PM   #29
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Old 06-28-04, 04:35 PM   #30
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i’ll stay sprayin for days..............this kids playin-with-gays
his spits couldnt be path-Illogical if he lost his way-in-a-maze
^Nice Opener' .. Was Heated..!!!!! 7/10

this battles a fairytale n imma be the gingerbread man cuz u cant-catch-me
even if we was playin cards n both drew a pair yo still cant-match-E
^Weak Punch FoReal..... 2/10

it dont matter this bitch tryin to be Mrs Mathers, so gather all yo ammo
erupt fire on yo ass like a volcano, yo lines couldnt play me if i was a piano
^Nice Multies...!!!! Aight Punch 5/10

neva attractin a woman cuz you couldnt make the bed rock if you was Fred
its like im drummin my verse into your brain im guna get it through you head
^Aint Likeing It ToO Much.. But Its Aight 3/10

your aim is clearly off target your showin emcees that you miss-this way
my punches goin thru you, makin your ass more “holy” than Christ-mas day
^Straight Closer' ..!!!! 7/10

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Beaten Me Is like retards In College..It Aint Gon' Happen......
Guns is Clappen...kids spittin serious, but the crowds just Laughin....
^Aight Opener... 7/10

you couldn't stack doe even if you worked at the bakery....
You couldn't see gold even if you played for the Lakers, G.....
^Safe Punch' ... And Personal..!!! 4/10

Stay Alert, Dubz Just Got Merked..And His Feelings Are hurt.....
one line will leave you burnt, Your Shits out of style like Fat Albert.....
^Ok... Punchline.. Decent Bar 7/10

you,and your career have the same things in common, they both fake....
Lines'll Kill You, leave your body at the bottom of the lake....
^Fell Off Short With Your Second Line... Playa 2/10

Burn you to crisp, you lied when you said you was sick
...so i guess the sayin "Lier Lier Pants On Fire" works For You.....
Cause really i dont know who's wacker..you or your crew
^Nice Closer' ..!!! Wasnt Nothing Great Though... 7/10

Vote: E-Dubs' ..!!!! Came Close Though.....!! Capitol You Just Fell Off A Bit Short BabeBoi' .. But You Gawt Madd PoTential..!!!!!

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