ight here r da rules we'll spit 10 lines min 12 line max
no d/r votes, no crew votes, no hate votes
u got 15 mins afta check-in 2 spit ur rhyme
u go 1st gl 2 ya

c'mon u piece of chicken shit stop bitching up & get on so we can battle

diz battle of urs will end friday nite at 12 a.m.

well since ur scared i'll end diz shit rite now diz is my check-in

yo my lyrical punches will knock u flat on ur azz like Zab Judah
i'll blaze ur bitch azz like i do my blunt when i'm smoking my buddah
i'll leave ur head spinning like tennis balls in my bicycle spokes
if u eva get sent 2 jail u'll get raped when u bend ova 2 picc up da soap
my flows will lyrically bite into u like mike tyson do when he wants 2 win a fight
i'm focus like disposable cameras dat will sho u da light
if u wanna get bucc, i'll beat ur azz worst den da cops did rodney king
i'll have my niggaz stomp ur ho azz all day when dey hear da bell ring
but i got u scared & hiding underground like saddam did a while ago
faking like ur thuggish & a g but diz bitch is friendlier den casper da ghost

i like ur flow but it needs a lil mo elevation but since he was pussy & not showed up u win by d/q but u got my vote devil advocate

c'mon ppl vote on diz uppin 4 mo votes give me my votes so diz thread can close

its aight, i like some of the lines but the last one isnt so good

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Poetry Contest! Drop your Verses

Cant Belive This,..... Got A Vote Before I Even Fucking Dropped.
Mus Be Coz Peeps No That Im Hot....... And Your Jus A Flop./
Now I Know Why They Call You Devils Advocate.
Thats Your Medal For Wipeing His Arse When He Has-a-shit/
Im No No Show You Said Drop B4.......... 12 Am Friday Night.
Where I Come From Its 6.30pm ...........nd Outside Its Light/
Bet You Wish I No Showed Coz Thats The Only Way Youd Win.
Coz Your Lyrics Are Are Rubbish.........
..................... Thats Not Worthy Of Being Put In A Bin/
Tried To Get Votes B4 I Even Fucking Posted...
.....i Could Of Ripped U A Lot More.........
.......jus As Well Im More Freindly Than Casper The Ghost Is....

it was an okay battle but both of y'all need 2 elevate lyrically in y'all approaches but delivery i'll give 2 riff raff, structure goes 2 devil advocate, punchlines goes 2 devil's advocate so my vote goes 2 devil advocate cuz he lyrically smashed u str8 up

flow goes 2 d.a. structure goes 2 d.a. delivery goes 2 riff raff lyrical punches goes 2 d.a. u lost me 2 at da last line also d.a. but it'z all good cuz u got da job done so my vote goes 2 d.a.

lyrically attacks-d.a.
delivery-riff raff
flow-undecided but if i had 2 choose i've say d.a. cuz he didn't lose me as much as riff raff did when i read his verse
elevation is really need in both of y'all next battles on da real but hands down my vote goes 2 d.a. cuz he held it down

uppin 4 votes in da last line i meant 2 put he's softer den casper da ghost not friendly but fucc it i need 1 mo vote 2 win & end diz pussy's win streak u know