10 linez

house rules

spit due by saturday

alright good luck both..an Da...our crew is HC not HS..but sall good...Rip Him Sire

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ur crew aint good enough to get the right initials

yo yo

When I get up on dis Mic I'm constantly Wreck-in Him/
Nigga Sire suck so much dick he need captiol to Check-him In/
My AMAZIN shit hits ya deep like Im da RB Vince Carter/
Lightning lyrics strikin ya so hard lookin like da RB Harry Potter/
Soft little marshmellows, who ain't got da fuckin street in his BLOOD/
Fatal stay wit da Gatz and Nines, all dis fat bitch is Packin is FUDGE/
So Step da fuck back CUZ, and let me Surpass what you never WAS/
Nigga walked through da hood and thought deez peeps must really LUV...Mickey D's cuz they talkin how they always got NUGS...haaa/
End dis battle wit ease, I aint even need da Nukes da Finish You/
Better keep prayin dat Capitols yo Avril, cuz I ain't Wit You/(avrils song-Im wit u)

I will vote on this when the otha kid drops since D hit one of my battles up.

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*smacks croz*


talentless, illiterate pussy... don't get me started
it's obvious
kid must work for the city, how he recycles garbage....
croz's ugly as fuck, but know what? at least he's....
the shit
I'd feed off his verse, but I don't eat feces.....
this ain't even a battle it's a slaughter, pitiful....
croz's dope
...............and disfigured orcs are beautiful
in battle, kid lasts about as long as a crack hit
dumbass....
he slit his own wrist, to show his fatal tactic
I see how croz works, sneaky little homo
set it up &.....
never PM'd the link, hopin to win by a no-show

bitch....

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uppin............................................g et a new structure dawg

A'ight...wasn't a great battle...but Sire takes it...but his structure is fucked, and some lines flow like shit...but Sire had the better punches, and that is what a battle is about. D, you had some okay punches...but some were played...like packing fudge? Come on...

No hate.

Vote- Sire

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aight this ones easy... crozzy bitch slapped sire... sire you need to elevate dawg (no hate) but your structure and rhymje scheme was way off... both had decent punches and personals but croz takes this one with a better over all drop and rhyme scheme and structure... keep elevatin yall... good battle

VOTE croz

votes needed below

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132403

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16 KOs 19 WINS

uppin

aight
open:sire
finisher:sire
punches:sire
flow:both
Structure:croz..(slow down ya lines sire)
vocab:sire
vote:sire ..he got this bcuz his verse was more complex and overall jus better no hate to croz

any ways can yall holla at tha battles in ma sig

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umm yaaa....this battle was shitty. sorry, no hate on either you two but these need some serious work. first off both of ur structures were shit and it didnt seem all that original. the only reason im gunna give this one to croz is becuz he flow was a lil better, but not by much

v - croz

uppin this for my boi...............................................

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