holla at me if u wan battle bruv..

set me the fuck up!

Peace.

i'm starting to get alittle tight about voting cuz i vote for people but they don't return tha fava so before i vote on this battle one of you please vote on tha battle on my sig and i'll return tha fava

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Uppin.....u gotta have 120 votes or more ppl!!!!!!!!!

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A'ight...this was a close battle, but I weak one...Smokescreen, I thought some of ya shit was tite...structure was good, flow was good...multies was a'ight...you just need to throw in some personals. Undestructable, I thought you came a'ight for a new guy...you just need to werk on everythin to get even better.

Vote- Smokescreen

No Hate. Hit these up.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130043

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130054

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Uppin for honest votes so we can get this closed ppl. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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damn this was a tight battle but damn arrest got merked

smoke
was an iight verse... multies were iight but nothing was spetacular... punchlines were iight but not very good but they were enought to merk undestrucable....
personals were iight but ive seen alot better....structure was alot better then arrest and that is why you won...flow was pretty nice and it had it ups and downs but overall you won this battle

undestrucable
you had an iight verse but it was pretty weak at times... structure was iight but you really need to stop with // and shyt to end your lines that really getting played...mutlies were iight but pretty lame at times ... personals well i think werent any....punchlines were str8 but smokesckreen had alot more.. and that is the reason why you lost

Vote=smokeskreen
please return the favor in my sig thank you

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Kid bit....gay...good thing he's banned....
smoke u won this one ne'ways if he didnt get banned.


hit this up wit an honest vote please. thanks
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132403

iight man..ill vote on this hott battle if u vote for mines first..i swear ill return the favor heres the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...54&page=2&pp=15

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ayo..keep it the voting honest though yo...iight good looks

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uppin this shit!!! u need 120 post to vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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I’m slicin’ through ya body nigga rippin ya cartilage
Ya verse is like a sewer hole it’s flowin wit garbage
Nice punch, good opener 7/10
You lyrically farted I’m killin ya and just getting started
Couldn’t spit a special verse if ya yas fuckin’ retarted
the lyrically farted wasnt good, but the next line was good "special verse" good. 7/10
Destruct the “Undestructible” my verse is physically untouchable
Dr ya ass like Huxtable from the Cosby’s turn u into a Lunchable
weak punch..weak weak 4/10
A comic exhibit ya style reached its limit this nigga is timid
Ban and prohibit ya wack ass life cuz aint no use to live-it
good..nuttin special though..aight 6/10
Battle me kid u gonna regret it and don’t u neglect it
You gonna take a “L” dogg remember I said it
weak weak closer..boring 3/10

averaged: 5.4

Damn nigga, your shyt iz a bore, u rap az slow as my grandma drives//
a chance of u beatin me is like a chance for da sun don't rise//
the first line was ass, real ass, then u came up so i have 2 give u half 5/10
You won 3 times straight, so its time for you ta start loosin//
Battlin me?Are you mental, jst go back to ur home da ill mental institution//
weak..heard dat shit a million times..wack 2.5/10
Hearin you rhyme? Is like eatin ur moms home made cinninman roll//
It sucks cuz it has no taste, so get a rap book n practice a lil mo//
wack..wack..wack..1 more time..WACK. nuttin 'WOW'. 3/10
Definition of $mokeScreen: White boy, 4 feet tall n has color-blindness//
If he waz eva to be rated, he'd be a 10, Oops i forgot da minus//
aight..no more punches?...im waitin for them..4/10
Your three n O, im bout to add a loss to ur record if u didn't know//
Cuz why should i even try wen dis kid raps weaker den a 3 year old//
weak closer..man..that was a simplistic punchline...weak 3/10

averaged: 3.5

vote: $moke
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both of yall can yall please honestly and professionaly on my current battle..judge it right cuz mad people gettin DQ'd for it...iight 1..please vote because i took a while to think about dis battle.1
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100

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