alright.............LEZ GO

10-12 lines
no d/r cv or biting
no feeding
blind spit
2 hours to spit after check in
good luck

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ight diz is my official check-in i'm spittin my verse a lil bit

yo i don't y sum bitch would name dem selves state capitol in da 1st case
ur a pitful excuse of a mc on rb who is a disgrace 2 da whole entire human race
ya softer den fuccin charmin tissue dat sumbody blows their nose wit
u giving me an oral presentation like monica lewinskosy did 2 da president
ur whole rapping style is like a see-thru pair of boxers ur azz is threw
cuz out of all da members out of hardwood class sickz ur da weakest link out of ya crew
u neva should have accept my challenge 2 u anotha L 2 ur lost column
i'm like a bowling ball & ur like bowling pins dat i knock down who can't help but 2 keep falling
so wut u should do is fall 2 ur knees & beg me 4 mercy & not 2 lyrically kick ur azz nemo
cuz i'm done wit blazing, toting, & smoking ur ho azz like i do when i smoke my dro


u can neva eva, neva eva, get on my level// i'm da shit on here give me my props

Merk you easily if murder was the case,
i'd have you preachin, Like Murda Mase...............
If you steppin to my plate,
ill blow off your fuckin hands before you even touch home base..........

Blast The Gauge put A whole through your rib cage..............
your bars aint stoppin me,
Like a fat bitch trapped in a bird cage..............
your lines dont even rhyme it was more rock & roll then hiphop.........
like a fat man on an anerexic chick,
im crushin this bitch from ontop....................
This Gay Wannabee thug calls Himself Loose Cannon...........
But the only thing you bangin is Dums..Like Nick Cannon...........
Rip out your verses spinal chord, so your lines collapse...........
An attach-on dick is the only thing you got strapped........
Dayum Once again I K.O another weak Fag..................
and once again the cops have to put another,
one of my victims in a plastic bag..........

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and drums not dums..myu fault...........................

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yo i don't y sum bitch would name dem selves state capitol in da 1st case
ur a pitful excuse of a mc on rb who is a disgrace 2 da whole entire human race
WAAAAAAAAACK opener...blah..4/10
ya softer den fuccin charmin tissue dat sumbody blows their nose wit
u giving me an oral presentation like monica lewinskosy did 2 da president
Monica Lewinski is play'd..play'd punchline..4/10
ur whole rapping style is like a see-thru pair of boxers ur azz is threw
cuz out of all da members out of hardwood class sickz ur da weakest link out of ya crew
wack..no fuckin hot punches..u need hot punches..5/10
u neva should have accept my challenge 2 u anotha L 2 ur lost column
i'm like a bowling ball & ur like bowling pins dat i knock down who can't help but 2 keep falling
wack punchline..maan..THUMBS DOWN 4.5/10
so wut u should do is fall 2 ur knees & beg me 4 mercy & not 2 lyrically kick ur azz nemo
cuz i'm done wit blazing, toting, & smoking ur ho azz like i do when i smoke my dro
WACK ASS CLOSER..wack wack Kuwack...4/10

averaged: 4.3

Merk you easily if murder was the case,
i'd have you preachin, Like Murda Mase...............
aight opener..too quick of a opener..7/10
If you steppin to my plate,
ill blow off your fuckin hands before you even touch home base..........
good..a lil play'd..but okay..6/10
Blast The Gauge put A whole through your rib cage..............
your bars aint stoppin me,
Like a fat bitch trapped in a bird cage..............
hah..good..made me laugh..first time in this battle..8/10
your lines dont even rhyme it was more rock & roll then hiphop.........
like a fat man on an anerexic chick,
im crushin this bitch from ontop....................
hahah..now u makin me rollin..iight good punchline 8/10
This Gay Wannabee thug calls Himself Loose Cannon...........
But the only thing you bangin is Dums..Like Nick Cannon...........
OKAY..AIGHT..nuttin special..6/10
Rip out your verses spinal chord, so your lines collapse...........
An attach-on dick is the only thing you got strapped........
iight..MAKE ME LAUGH AGAIN!..lol 6/10
Dayum Once again I K.O another weak Fag..................
and once again the cops have to put another,
one of my victims in a plastic bag..........
goood..closer..it was cold..which is good for a closer..it was dark..8.5/10

averaged: 7.07

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

Plus...State put up more lines than LOOSE which was an easy advantage...

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Mike Hawk is a wackass......

-Loosecanon.
yo i don't y sum bitch would name dem selves state capitol in da 1st case
ur a pitful excuse of a mc on rb who is a disgrace 2 da whole entire human race
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
ya softer den fuccin charmin tissue dat sumbody blows their nose wit
u giving me an oral presentation like monica lewinskosy did 2 da president
weak flow, good wordplay, played out punch
ur whole rapping style is like a see-thru pair of boxers ur azz is threw
cuz out of all da members out of hardwood class sickz ur da weakest link out of ya crew
average flow, should've switched the lines, first line had wordplay and was an aight punch
u neva should have accept my challenge 2 u anotha L 2 ur lost column
i'm like a bowling ball & ur like bowling pins dat i knock down who can't help but 2 keep falling
weak flow, weak wordplay, wording wrecked this line completely
so wut u should do is fall 2 ur knees & beg me 4 mercy & not 2 lyrically kick ur azz nemo
cuz i'm done wit blazing, toting, & smoking ur ho azz like i do when i smoke my dro
so so flow, aight wordplay, played out punch


-Statecapitol.
Merk you easily if murder was the case,
i'd have you preachin, Like Murda Mase...............
average flow, good wordplay, weak punch
If you steppin to my plate,
ill blow off your fuckin hands before you even touch home base..........
average flow, aight wordplay, would've been a decent line with better wording
Blast The Gauge put A whole through your rib cage..............
your bars aint stoppin me,
Like a fat bitch trapped in a bird cage..............
aight flow, rhyming cage twice was , decent wordplay, aight punch
your lines dont even rhyme it was more rock & roll then hiphop.........
like a fat man on an anerexic chick,
im crushin this bitch from ontop....................
so so flow, decent wordplay, two similar punches in a row ain't good, spread them out next time mayne.
This Gay Wannabee thug calls Himself Loose Cannon...........
But the only thing you bangin is Dums..Like Nick Cannon...........
rhyming two words unless it has a purpose ain't good either, coo wordplay, aight punch
Rip out your verses spinal chord, so your lines collapse...........
An attach-on dick is the only thing you got strapped........
average flow, decent wordplay, played out punch
Dayum Once again I K.O another weak Fag..................
and once again the cops have to put another,
one of my victims in a plastic bag..........
average flow, not really any wordplay, straight punch though


Overall State got this. State, you made some dumb mistakes mayne. Just take some time with your verses, because I can see you're better than this. Besides your mistakes, work on your creativity and flow a little. Ain't too much wrong with your steez mayne. I see you keep getting closer and closer to being good. Ain't too many now who actually trying to adjust their shit. Props to you mayne. Loose, work on your flow, creativity, wordplay and consistently using punchlines. State took the flow, wordplay, punchlines in this battle.


Vote - Statecapitol.

I think state won this battle..i thin his sturc really helped him in this battle...i think his wordplay and personals were used very well in this battle nice work man..my boi doing his **** now let get this **** started lol...nah...loose i think yoiu need to work on struc...really afte the first line i did not feel like reading anymore but i finished it i think you need to elevate iight...

Vote--state

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lol 3 votes but only 1 polled........hm..............

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i stop by checked out diz battle is was ight but both of ya need 2 elevate both originality goes 2 lc, delivery goes 2 sc, punches sc, but flow goes 2 lc, & last but least got 2 their point which was lc dat'z y i chose lc in da battle

it was ok dat y'all battled but need 2 elevate lyrically but neway structure sc, flow lc, originality both of ya, punches lc cuz he delivered mo & dey connected but otha den dat i would have 2 go wit lc cuz he barely slid by wit diz win

it was kinda boring reading both of ya battle rhymes but sumthin in both of ya verses caught my eye while reading dem both
in sc rhymes u said, "if ur stepping 2 my plate, i'll blow off both of ya hands b4 u reach home base", but da playing drums like Nick Cannon is played out stop dat shit
in lc rhymes u said, "ya softer den charmin tissue dat sumbody blows their nose wit, ur giving me an oral presentation like monica lewkinskosy did 2 da president" was pretty funny but flow goes sc, punches lc, delivery sc, originality both, structure lc, & personals were more their 4 lc den sc u didn't really put enuff personals in urs so my vote goes 2 lc

both were ok 2 read ova i didn't dislike nethang it just u 2 need 2 elevate mo in ur rhymes structure sc, punches lc, flow both, originality both, personals goes 2 lc da only reason y is dat he landed alot mo den u did sc cuz it seem like u were bacc tracking on wut lc said when he was rhyming so u put sum his phrases in urs dat is wut gave diz battle away from u my vote goes 2 lc