iight you know the rules..\
10- 15 lines max spit fue by 12:00 tonite

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here it comes ok



watsthe point a carryin a nife if u can even fight, thinkin someone ill jump u or threaten ur life, an if they do ull be ready, ur nife in ur hand an ur anga steady, but deep in side ur soul, u wanna crawl into a whole, roll up in to a ball like a pitifil mole, sweat drippin into a volumis puddle a body soil, ur like an actor pretendin to be royal, the enemy is milk an u hope they spoil, around here ur nife is ur only friend, it cant dis u an ruin ur trend, while othas try an condesend, well i may rap bad an i may rap good, but unlike others im not from the hood, but wats that mean, that just because im clean, that i cant be seen, by the bright lights, that shine like ultra brite,just because i don get in bloddy fist fights, evry god forsaken nite,

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Vishiss BVishiss B

woa i did that in like 5 mins it might be a lil scratchy

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Vishiss BVishiss B

Livexyourxwords: i'll set it up just be ready to spit
bindizzle34: ok
bindizzle34: so wen do we do it
Livexyourxwords: spit when u want
bindizzle34: does it have to be bout a certain thing an how many lines
bindizzle34: ?
Livexyourxwords: go to the thread man
bindizzle34: huh?
Livexyourxwords: go to our thread
Livexyourxwords: and then spit
Livexyourxwords: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133272
bindizzle34: ok im done
bindizzle34: go wen ur ready
bindizzle34: its kinda scratchy i did iy=t fast
bindizzle34: u there
bindizzle34: HELLO
bindizzle34: man ansa me
Livexyourxwords: yea i'm going out i'll spit tonite when i get back
bindizzle34: iight
bindizzle34: u betta
Livexyourxwords: shut the fuck up..you done anyway


ok here it goes..

Yo, you drop TEXT DISGUSTING, peeped ur crew, dog you're LESS THAN NOTHING..
bring yer squad, Ill "take vishish down myself" like employees lookin fo destruction!/
Legends a DEMON WITH VISCIOUS LINES...
faggit, told you to go "blow for blow" with me, you were EAGER TO 69!/
Watch me CHOKE THIS FRAIL COWARD,
Touchin-my- spot-nah get fucked-when-u-"drop-bars" like 'SOAP' IN JAIL SHOWERS/ lol
U aint SURVIVING THIS cause this verse'll get so many "Ohhs(Owe)"
I'll prolly get DENIED FOR A LOAN!/
ill BOMB YOUR FACE THE FLOW HURTS,
and yer punches? like "alsheimers patients with master locks"...the 'COMBINATIONS DONT WORK!'/
Okay you dont know how to battle, didnt you any personals G
//i'ma take it easy on you this time Vishish b//
Haha he wanted me to spit tonite, i was going out but hes probably staying up//
so i told him fuck off and put my away message up//hahaha
im VEXED AND SO PISSED, grab TECHS AND THROW CLIPS, just got back from rehab, kept readin your verse then "hit X" TO CLOSE IT!

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vote up y'all i merked this fucker..fo sho...

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dude how old r u
im only 12 an look at the shit i pulled

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Vishiss BVishiss B

yo vote on my battle first then ill vote on this http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1386757

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cum on now vote we need some votes if u vote ummm well ull be tight

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this is what i define as lyrical murder

visshit - good wordplay...the only thing you got, but i can go to a rhyme dictionary and copy all the words that rhyme and make more punches than you

gods son - damn...wordpay, punches, metas, everything

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-Vishissb.
watsthe point a carryin a nife if u can even fight,
thinkin someone ill jump u or threaten ur life,
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch
an if they do ull be ready,
ur nife in ur hand an ur anga steady,
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
but deep in side ur soul, u wanna crawl into a whole,
roll up in to a ball like a pitifil mole,
coo flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
sweat drippin into a volumis puddle a body soil,
ur like an actor pretendin to be royal, the enemy is milk an u hope they spoil,
coo flow, aight wordplay, forced too many ideas in this
around here ur nife is ur only friend,
it cant dis u an ruin ur trend, while othas try an condesend,
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch
well i may rap bad an i may rap good,
but unlike others im not from the hood,
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
but wats that mean,
that just because im clean, that i cant be seen,
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch
by the bright lights, that shine like ultra brite,
just because i don get in bloddy fist fights, evry god forsaken nite,
good flow, so so wordplay, weak punch


-Godsson.
Yo, you drop TEXT DISGUSTING, peeped ur crew, dog you're LESS THAN NOTHING..
bring yer squad, Ill "take vishish down myself" like employees lookin fo destruction!/
good flow, liked the multis, coo wordplay, aight punch
Legends a DEMON WITH VISCIOUS LINES...
faggit, told you to go "blow for blow" with me, you were EAGER TO 69!/
average flow, coo wordplay, played out punch
Watch me CHOKE THIS FRAIL COWARD,
Touchin-my- spot-nah get fucked-when-u-"drop-bars" like 'SOAP' IN JAIL SHOWERS/ lol
coo flow, aight wordplay, played out to death punch
U aint SURVIVING THIS cause this verse'll get so many "Ohhs(Owe)"
I'll prolly get DENIED FOR A LOAN!/
average flow, decent wordplay, forced punch
ill BOMB YOUR FACE THE FLOW HURTS,
and yer punches? like "alsheimers patients with master locks"...the 'COMBINATIONS DONT WORK!'/
average flow, decent wordplay, straight punch
Okay you dont know how to battle, didnt you any personals G//
i'ma take it easy on you this time Vishish b//
average flow, no wordplay, no punch
Haha he wanted me to spit tonite, i was going out but hes probably staying up//
so i told him fuck off and put my away message up//hahaha
average flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
im VEXED AND SO PISSED, grab TECHS AND THROW CLIPS,
just got back from rehab, kept readin your verse then "hit X" TO CLOSE IT!
coo flow, aight wordplay, weak punch


Overall, Son took this. Son had the wordplay, punches, and flow. Stop bolding your wordplay, take the - out to show multis, shorten your lines, and work on your creativity. Vish, work on forming a punchline, creativity, a more complex flow, and wordplay.


Vote - Godsson.

I could barely follow Vishish or watever his name is. He didnt even diss Gods son neither. Gods son came with better punches, and an overall flow to his verse. I liked that one line about droppin the soap or watever. That shit was funny as hell.

Vote-Gods son

Vote on the battle on JaeBurnz...Link's in the sig..

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aight 3-0 uppin for more votes keep them coming..i murdered this cat

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omg im sposed to dis him ya tobad i don dis ppl i don even no i dk if i lost im only twelve but me vs buckwild i sucked at the beginning but u should check the shit i pulled aat the end

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Vishiss BVishiss B

Vishiss B- your verse was decent...but kind of hard to read n shit...ya know..your punches were okay but they just didnt even hit hard enough manye...you really didnt even have a good flow to go wit it...and yo structure sucked pretty bad..but overall manye elevate...

Gods Son- your verse was nice...your punches were also good to they hit hard enough to win this battle you also had a decent flow with this...but your structure was a little off it was kinda hard to read but...overall you get my vote for better hard hitin punches , better flow, and better verse....

v/God's Son

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