This was a pretty tight battle, I had to read thru it a couple times to decide who won, ill break it down like this:

Flow: I thought MC AKs flow started off good, but then it was spuratic, it kinda came and went. Miss Lyricist had a good flow the entire verse though, it stayed constant. v/Miss

Structure: Miss lyricist was def on point with her structure, which in turn helped her flow. MC AK you aint really have bad structure, but your 2nd and last lines were streched a lil much, i mean maybe strech em a word or 2 if the syllables match, but it hurts ya flow if its anymore than that.
v/Miss

Personals: MC AK you was all over this one, talkin about the spanish and PMS, and shit...i dont need to say anything more you took this easy.
v/MC AK

Punches: MC AK had some pretty hard hittin punches, but then again so did Miss. Lyricist. I like her punches though because a lot of them are funny, and its fun to read the verse. I think MC AKs hit harder though.
v/ MC AK

Multis: This category also belonged to MC AK he came right out of the hole, throwin punches with multis. Miss Lyricist I wasnt seein any from you, just mainly AB AB rhyming (I do that a lot too though lol).
v/MC AK

Open/Close: Miss Lyricist came hard with her opener, and she exited nicely also. MC AK your opener was aight, but it wasnt as hard as hers, which was a good metaphor. Her closer was also a nice punch, not real hard. MC AK you shoulda threw a punch at the end, you just kinda fizzled out there at the end.
v/Miss on both

Overall Miss wins it just by the skin of her teeth, with the opener and closer.

v/Miss Lyricist

Yo, AK took this in punches. He came harder in my view.. an it seems to me he came hardest of Miss's battles, like peeps dunno how to battle chicks... hmm... I think Miss needs some complexity, like Meta's... both got pretty good flow. Good battle

VOTE: MC AK

Peace

ha ha ah, thanks for the spelling lesson, my bad spelling is only surpassed by my type o's. got nothing but luv but U do need to quit the whole spanish thing. Unless ur mixed or somthin I guess than its okay. wats the situation here? did I spell that right? oh shit. let me go check....I'll be right back in a few.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

aiight look i aint hatin, yo verse was pretty well writtenn , but 2 people hav said ur usin personals in ya verse, can sum1 point em out 2 me or sumthin? cuz i aint seen em

and if my verse lacked personals, then why did i bother explainin why i said certain things, like the spanish thing n that.. no beef or nuttin miss, im jus curious why people is sayin sum things that aint true. na mean

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Eye, you can go the fuck away now.

And for your info, my grandmother is part hispanic, so that's where I get my spanish from motherfucker.

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If it was me she would have gottin ripped. Joke? But i liked wit both of you were doin. its just she had beeter rhymes than you and by reading other battles from both of you she elivated more and she got you more wit punches

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Fuse

its cool if she won, i don care about that, but i git tha feelin there was sum whak votes goin round.....namely tha personals......i got told that my verse lacked in personals and lyricicts had good ones, someone else came out sayin she had better personals then me. only prob is that there wus no personals in her verse....

if tha 2 voters can point em out then ill shut my mouth yo, but i dont see it happenin...... so wus sup?

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Uppin this fucktard

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that was the shit miss l ur fine and u know how to flow holla back u had some badass punchlines like that bruce almight shit fuk ya u know ill vote for u hey what grade r u in anewayz till then laterz.