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young beezy 0 0%
Malefic 5 100.00%
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Old 07-07-04, 05:24 PM   #1
Malefic
.....Death Awaits.....
 
From: Deep Within
young beezy Vs. Malefic

IP: 191B 9BF9

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Old 07-07-04, 05:24 PM   #2
Malefic
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Old 07-07-04, 05:29 PM   #3
young beezy
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From: fo' shizzle in tha dirty but reppin LB New J
IP: 3240 794D

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1 love live life
2 the fullest

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beezy crew from life to death
n when I die put the colors across my chest
 
Old 07-07-04, 05:56 PM   #4
Malefic
.....Death Awaits.....
 
From: Deep Within
IP: 191B 9BF9

Grit my teeth...I break young's wits wit spit' not bullets-
Beezy's gotta wear a strap'on jus to"live life 2 it's fullest"
Jus like the rest. I'm making the arrangement's for ur chest..
Your far from best...an I'm breakin your grill like acid Crest
I'll even help...I'll spot you more of lead then 10 leapords..
You lak the effort-Your skippin worste than your Broken Record
You stand wit me?....please....only way would be thru AOL IP's
This girl's just rocky terrain...litterally-,an I'm a Cherokee
Beezy crew to death...nuttin left..inhale your last line of breath
I could spit from west...an still rip the dirty wit my weaker left
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Old 07-07-04, 06:39 PM   #5
young beezy
Light Weight
 
From: fo' shizzle in tha dirty but reppin LB New J
IP: 4289 77F4

now im battlen this kat that think he sweet
but when he get in the zone he cant take my heat
he the type that'll go by yo back and kreep
cuz like a broken pipe man yo flow is weak
and u say satans pet but im satan himself
and to beat me u best dig deep within
cuz im like a leech and ill get up under ya skin
and put bullets in u that will hurt ya kin
ill put scars on ya body like haven a c-section
tutorials aint in this forum u out ya jurisdiction
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Old 07-07-04, 06:47 PM   #6
young beezy
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From: fo' shizzle in tha dirty but reppin LB New J
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Old 07-07-04, 07:14 PM   #7
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Malefic won this one easily. Breezy had a good structure, but Mal's punches were hittin harder. He had that dildo opener and that Crest line that just killed me righ there. Keep elevation Breezy.

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Old 07-07-04, 07:25 PM   #8
N.Tavarez
the medicine man
 
From: East Coast
IP: A49A 4FF0

Malefic get's my vote easy / that other guy didnt even try too hard
u can tell malefic put more thought into his verse then beezy

return the favor or at least just read one of mines
 
Old 07-07-04, 07:51 PM   #9
The Black Plague
... I Dont Hate...
I Speak The Truth
 
From: Detroit
IP: 8C2F E36C

Malefic won this with better wordplay and better punches... Beezy lacked wordplay and complexity

Malefic- Nice verse, you came solid in all aspects. You had better wordplay than beezy, which helped you, and your punches hit nicely. I think you could've flowed a little better tho, but your flow still wasn't bad. Your personals connected, and your closer was tight. Good verse.

Beezy- Your verse wasn't bad, it just wasn't all that good. You needed better wordplay, your punches weren't bad, they just couldve been worded better. You had nice flow, and your personals also were pretty decent. You need more complexity and depth in your lines, but not a bad verse. Elevate.
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Old 07-07-04, 08:55 PM   #10
Malefic
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From: Deep Within
IP: FA9B 2712

Nice. Hittin up them links in like 20 minutes. Gotta get dinner. Uppin 1.
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Old 07-07-04, 10:07 PM   #11
S.P.
Flyweight
 
IP: 4289 77F4

Both yall was nice

Mal's punches was better though

Breezy had some good stucture

over all my opinion is mal's

But now my nigs ima battle u
 
Old 07-07-04, 11:39 PM   #12
QBsmasher
Banned: Cheating
 
IP: 3240 794D

Both yall had a pretty good structure...Maleific however had a much beter flow, all the multies thats were throwin in there were helpin it a lot.

Punches were hittin pretty hard for Malefic...beezy you just had too many basic rhymes, and they werent helpin ya cause. Try not too talk too much about heat guns and stuff like that unless you use a crazy metaphor...I just dont think it impresses peeps too much over the net..feel me?

The multies and metas were def goin Malefic's way...beezy you just need to be a lil more creative with what ya spittin.

v/malefic
 
 


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