Ok lets make it 6 lines

No recycaling
No crew votes
No biting.

You up first.

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ok checkin in and u up 1st dog....... good luck word up

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Wtf you said 4 line in the call out

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o0o boy

Nigga you better leave this game alone.
For I make you hang up ya mic like a telephone.
Jae Burnz be on the move, so u can say im roamin like a cellular fone.
Fuck if u not in view, ill hit u from long distance like a tellular fone.
You homo, Put this needle in ya but, and get the lethalNJection.
Post up and i block, so u can call it a freethrow rejection.

Votes start

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"Take you out of the game like James Worthy.You ain't worthy.Observe me.I send shots through ya jersey."(Jae Hood)
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uppin 4 votes......................Vote................... .uppin 4 votes

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LethalNJection

When you "release some anger", you line jae asshole with grease...
Mastermind underneith, and says "Im loving this breeze!...
good wordplay...punch connected pretty nicely... - 6.5/10
Jae throw ya "tonsils on the court" cuz ya lyricz "choke on ballz"...
Jae couldnt "hold my flow" if ya stood between me and the stall,...
once again nice wordplay...punch was ok... - 5.5/10
i swing "punches" leave jae with a "neck brace"....
like "skeletons" doin "push-ups" he just a "dead weight"....
ha ha...good wordplay again...punch connected nicely...best bar in this battle... - 8/10

Overall - 20/30

JaeBurnz354

Nigga you better leave this game alone.
For I make you hang up ya mic like a telephone.
first line could have been a good set up...wordplay was simple as hell...punch didnt connect at all... - 3/10
Jae Burnz be on the move, so u can say im roamin like a cellular fone.
Fuck if u not in view, ill hit u from long distance like a tellular fone.
good wordplay in the first line...but u fucked it up when u rhymed fone with fone...i know cellular and tellular rhyme, but plenty of words rhyme with fone...punch didnt connect very much... - 4/10
You homo, Put this needle in ya but, and get the lethalNJection.
Post up and i block, so u can call it a freethrow rejection.
decent personal...good wordplay...punch connected ok... - 4/10

Overall - 11/30

my vote is gonna go to LethalNJection for comin with more connecting punches...and thats word...

VOTE - LETHALNJECTION

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx...

uppin uppin uppin ...................Vote.........

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yo burnz hit this battle up please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133718

Yo I dont have enough posts to vote so I guess this dont count but I'd say LethalNJection got it...I like his punches WAY better

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Opener - N/A
Closer - N/A
Structure - Lethal
Flow - Lethal
Punches - Lethal
Metas - Lethal
Personals - N/A

OVERALL - LethalNJection

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