Intro :

Bloods Hide Out... Envee enters the room

Envee: Yo i heard ya need something done?

Bloods Leader: Yeah 4 you 2 be down with the O.G.'s

Envee: How much I get??

Bloods Leader: 2,000

Envee: What I need 2 do?

Blood Leader: Go 2 tha 23'd street 2day at 4 and you will see
2 cars and a mafia leader i want him out of tha game ya got it?
The Italians are getting too involved again we need to take care
of this man but it wont be easy. I want the Fiore family boss dead
and defintly out of the game.

Envee: Done **Envee Leaves The Hide Out Wit A Automatic 9mm And A Machine Gun**

Verse:

I pulled up the red bandanna of my neck and tied it around my face...
Took tha 9 out cocked it back and aimed it at tha target everythings in place...
I'm ready i squezed tha trigger and tha automatic 9 let out 5 slugs...
I dont know what hit but i know they bout 2 be stepped on like Oriental Rugs...
I kept shootin till tha clip fell empty and wit a loud clink it hit tha ground...
They keep shootin at diffrent areas but I know im still not found...
I took tha machine gun and slid down so they can only see the gat from tha open window...
Im still not seen tho, bullets flyin out like torpedos, stayin high is keepin me alive im on that indo...
I hear the "Prey" screamin someone quik get me in tha car...
No one helped they drove thinkin that they would get far...
But i shot tha gas tank and 2 cars went flyin up and then with a loud noise they blew up...
This "Family" is gettin 2 soft on tha battle field like a full of water paper cup....
Tha "Target" screams again "someone help me up before i catch a shot"...
I dont hear police all i hear is mafia screamin and bussin i aint worried bout gettin caught....
Im runnin' out of bullets this is my last round in my "Chain Gun" im still bustin...
But i keep my finger thrusting on tha trigger i dunno who i hit, people are fallin its discusting....
Who ever is down, is down and it i aint even worried cause they dont know me....
Im out of bullets, should I leave? they wont know and bloods wont show me...
I cant hear tha leader and i think that i should juss leave about now...
Im being paranoid what if they find me? They wont! Will they? How?

Action: Envee runs out wit tha bullet shells in tha bag
Not knowin if he completed his mission, but left about 9 people
dead in tha street.

DON: crawls out the passanger side door of the car and crawls onto the steeet. He props himself up against the hood and looks around to see whos still alive. Disgusted by an unorganized hit he starts off.


Shots fired dispursed and the sun hit my back…
Kneel down the side a my car I’m bein’ attacked…
Shit some cheap hit ripped for one shit…
And they done quick hittin my car wit some tips…
Bouncing off the hood sparks flyin around us…
Some white guys laughin thinking they’ll clown us…
Pull out a revolver but neva had to use it…
Cause none challenged me I had power but neva abused it…
Peek up ova the hott heat rays blindin my vison…
Notice a bullet track cross the hoods made one long insicion…
Haha they gota be kiddin hitin an armored lexus…
Only thing they had good was we didn’t expect this…
A couple pauses in sound cliks vibratin the air…
Runnin outa ammo yo Vinny we gona have ta share…
Jus then I looked down and warmth flooded my chest…
One bullet it musta’ pierced straight through the vest…
Cause now I’m hit the quick click of fire around to guard me…
My soldiers shoot back at this one man white army…
Now the family they greafin’ over their great loss…
Cause he’s gone the last of a great boss…

The DON lays dead on the street killed by the new age of street gangs, the old ways of respect and loyalty are coming to an end

aight this was a topical for mosaic so leave some feedback much aprreciated thanks

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Uppin'

The second verse is 5 mins before I left... Like lookin in tha past what happen... From Dons point of view...

Uppin this shit for Feed

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Nice drop...Envee ur flow was really bad because of stretched lines...so work on that man....u did a pretty cool story.....just keep workin on not stretchin ya lines....DON u had a pretty good verse....way better flow....pretty good imagery and vocab....this collab was nice....just dotn stretch them lines Envee!...give it a 8.1/10....peace...

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Thanks More Feed please.

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nice good stuff .. but you both need to work on structure.. thats the only thing..u guyz played this out good with a good plot.. way to rep mosaic 8.5/10

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i like wut tha story wuz about. but u guyz need 2 werk on yo rymes, u got a bunch of 1 sylable rymes, werk on that. werd

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damn that was a nice drop ... it was on point.... had some nice feelin...

'good drop .. please hit up my open mic

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B'z up nigga nice drop home boi ..ez 8.5/10 wun...

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Good Shit thanks for tha feed everyone!

Ill make sure 2 look for ya open mics and ill leave feed...

More feed please..

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lets get some other feeback

like i said before ...nice job.. but i wanan emphasize on ya strucutre both of ya should fix it...

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Yeah, was very creative, dope lines and everything was on point except like evryones been sayin your structure

I think you get the point now about it though but overall it was a very creative drop

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