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07-12-04, 03:23 AM
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[DeaTh-Is-NeaR!-]
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In Loving Memory
IP: 5043 32F4
you came home from school n went strait to ur room lockin tha door
you went to the closet tied yourself up and was not touching the floor Your father came in and seen ur room was locked he broke it down seen you he was in shock He untied you and yelled your name from the top of his lungs Why wud you hang yourself you were so young i found out you werent dead but most of your brain is Were still wondering why they tryed to explain this you went on to live for the next 16 weeks but still you couldnt move on you own or even speak you came out of the hospital if the middle of June you sadly past away the 10th of july in the afternoon We were all sad but its better in peace then always in Pain You hung yourself once now why wud you do it again? In Loving Memory of Kyle Clarence Mason
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07-12-04, 04:06 AM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 5867 FD83
im feeling it, deepest condulances from me to you..
nice verse, hes prolly reading it right now |
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07-12-04, 04:12 AM
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[DeaTh-Is-NeaR!-]
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IP: 5043 32F4
I hope so man i miss him so much mayun too bad im not going to his funeral i wish i cud have, hes mah br0s fav cuzin so ya know hes all depressed ryte now
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07-12-04, 04:16 AM
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...Belong...
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IP: 4C49 64C6
Man thats personal it dont matter how it looks a subject like that is ALWAYS readable sorry 4 ur loss dawg but he's watchin ya now like VA said prolly readin that verse and smilin
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07-12-04, 12:00 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 4C49 64C6
that was really good, sorry for your loss, but the rhyme was great, feelin that
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07-12-04, 06:01 PM
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IP: 6E1D BBDB
yeah man..definatly sorry about the loss homie...keep your head up and know that he is lookin down livin life through you...keep uppin man..pz
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07-12-04, 06:15 PM
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IP: B09D C100
That was dep. It got you into the piece and I felt like you were very close to this piece.
hit this up: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134751
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-12-04, 11:08 PM
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Simply Dope
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IP: 4289 77F4
that was deep seemed like u were really into it... sorry for ur loss
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07-13-04, 09:24 PM
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G.T.I.G.
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IP: 15CC 7900
yo sorry for ya loss but thats was hott u were really into it and its deep real deep he prolly readin it n smilin ovah you
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07-19-04, 09:01 AM
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Ms. Get Gully
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IP: 4289 77F4
ill touch to it im feelin the depth im not even worried bout the rhyme scheme although it could have been a little better but i still think this was ill ..nice shit
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08-03-04, 10:01 AM
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Light Weight
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IP: D58E D6DC
alright verse, told a story, sorry bout the death, peace
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