Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin//
7/10 didnt just give ya that cuz my name up in it... but good openin, and creativity
It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband//
And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands//
6/10 creative, my opion kinda a weak punch tho
Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage//
Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage//
4/10 alright punch... shoulda said j-low instead of brit...*SLAnTED
Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle//
Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled//
5/10 nother alright punch, didnt surprise me much to be honest...
Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already//
You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony//
7/10 better punch
Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave//
And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave//
8/10 good endin, way to flip his garbage shit, but still could of been better...
*minus 3 points for slanted extended bars... sorry homz how i do it...

I'm checkin in, so lets begin//
battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins//
8/10 good openin, and good checkin... just get to the point lol
reach within, and give it ya heart and soul//
worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls//
7/10 nice punch feelin that shit.. way to extend from the last bars...(WITHIN)
stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs//
ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs//
5/10 might be tru, kinda weak tho
u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives//
I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges//
6/10 alight
its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble//
predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals//
7/10 gettin alittle better, im feelin that all 8th did was reverse alot of ya shit... now im just feelin like im readin the same shit twice....
with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled//
knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double//
7/10 alright ending...

33/60-8th

40/60-will nove

more breakin down...check it 8th, thought ya flow was sick when i first read it cause i read ya's first....then after i read will's i noticed all ya did was try to reverse his shit... not to hate or nothin... be more creative next time.... thats why im given this one to will... i would have given ya a shit more points if i didnt feel like you just tryin to reverse everything.. but other then that alright battle for ya 2, return the fav up on my audio....up in my sig under calamity...

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I cant vote cuz me and nova in crew but heres my opinion.

Will.
His flows and multis were on point. dont listen to miss. lyricist. Ud merk this bitch. Ur punches were creative and didn't disrupt the flow of Ur verse. Its all out ill. I liked everything on it. nice work. Ur verse get a 9 out of 10

8th. ur was also good. nah, im just messing wit. U lacked creativity and just rode ur opponents dick thru out the entire thing.

What, I do this? well I do this while Im doing it....to U!!!

thats wat Ur whole verse sounds like. Ur meditating on a carrage line sucked, it wasnt a punch at all. Ur flow was ok, but it whent off and on multiple times. nothing fresh about ur verse that caught my attention or made me thank that U could win. Ur verse gets a 6 out of 10. wouldve gotten more if U stop feeding of his verse and just spit ur own shit.

My vote would go to WillNova becouse of Punches, creativity, personals, flow, and structure.

it aint got nothing to do wit crew or me hating, I vote like this all the time when I see a man getting merked in the battle. it has nothing to do wit U and everything to do wit Ur verse. sorry if I affended U.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

WillNova

I'm checkin in, so lets begin//
battlin me is bad karma like the seven deadly sins//
->>wasted a whole line checkin in? its ok 4/10

reach within, and give it ya heart and soul//
worthless tries, ya bars are dry, I'll monopolize the polls//
->>pretty good 6/10

stomp the moles, reverse the role, plant my own bugs//
ya bars are weak, u hold no heat like broken coffee mugs//
->>doesnt make sense 2/10

u still struggle, gainin stress, you describe garbage like adjectives//
I make money, and lose this weight like women with miscarraiges//
->>doesnt connect...3/10

its embarrasin,send u travelin, save ya self the trouble//
predict the future like an oracle, u come wit weak rebuttals//
->>kinda cool 5/10

with bloody knuckles, u in a corner cuddled//
knock u out like alcohol, u swear u seeing double//
->>alright closer 4/10

->>total: 24/60

the 8th wonder

Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin//
->>feeding and second line makes no sense 3/10

It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband//
And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands//
->>feeding but ok 5/10

Trying to lose my weight? I’ll leave you meditating on a baby carriage//
Break this bitch’s neck, and have his so called “money making scheme” fucked up like Britney Spears marriage//
->>feeding and second line is wayy stretched 4/10

Weak rebuttals? This isn’t debating this is a rap battle//
Your humble lyrics don’t bruise me but it has most ill rappers baffled//
->>feeding but ok punch 5/10

Predicting the future? Then you’ll probably know the results already//
You rap like a malfunctioning robot, like is doing R&B with Beethoven’s 8th Symphony//
->>feeding + wack 2/10

Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave//
And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave//
->>feeding and second line doesnt make sense 4/10

->>total 23/60

this was a real close battle but WillNova took it.

youve gotta be more original than that 8th feeding is for herbs...and also making sense is more important than rhyming. no hate just advice.

will you gotta work on making sense too man that mole role line was real wack

v/willnova

\/hit these up honestly\/

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can we call a tie?Seriously both were good but willa's
rhymes were better structure was locked and came heavy
right frm the start.

aight people, this is a close one... but lets get sum votes in so we can finish it.... uppin again

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aight check it
i think that willnova's punches hit a lil harder
8th had alot more creativity
8th i like that last bars of yours
will i am feeling that coffe mug line

v- willnova

best lines were:
Seven deadly sins? Battling this bitch is easier then eating mandarins//
Cause you’re hardly an obstacle, like you’re a Popsicle high on gin//
It’s too bad my knuckles are bloody, so I’d choke you with a wristband//
And I’ll rip you up like I’m ripping up genetic DNA strands//

Structure: Will
Flow: 8th
Vocab: Will
Punches: 8th <came hard as hell

best closer: 8th> Long story short, I’ll have this bitch dig his own grave//
And prove to him I use garbage as a noun before having him molested in a rave//

ha haa lol nice battle you two, but i gotta give the vote to 8th Wonder, nigga you took this shit.. aight check my links in my sig ~LK diss~ aight

~wun~

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aight, thanx for the vote fiya, sense the sarcasim.... naw but good look fo the votes, lets get sum more in and finsh it, uppin uppin as always

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