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Old 07-13-04, 11:24 PM   #1
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Old 07-14-04, 12:08 AM   #2
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man i think carson went first...aiight flow was aiight, voice was errgh annoying. quality isnt great. cud be better. lyrics were average. i think the beat was better than this guyz vocals. tha part where the voice is edited is really wack. cant even hear wat tha fuck u saying. limited went next...wack flow, average lyrics...voice was okay. still man i think the beat is better than ur vocals. i think u guyz wrecked the beat..no hate juz telling u wats real...both need real uppin..
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Old 07-14-04, 01:09 AM   #3
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hmmm.. Carson went first yea.. it was aight..the lyrics were cool.. but you guys just need ot work on delivery.. like flow, mic presence ect... lyrics were coo tho and that beat was hot.. id say yall just need to work on ya delivery, and ya'll would be aight.. limited, hehe.. try and ride the beat a lil bit longer and smoother.. it sounded kinda choppy, na mean ? the lyrics of your verse were pretty good tho.. keep spittin..
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Old 07-14-04, 03:01 AM   #4
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Thanks for feed. Constructive criticism...but this is old shit.
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Old 07-15-04, 06:58 PM   #5
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errr...limited....why would you post this.....

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Old 07-15-04, 11:48 PM   #6
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The beat is nice.Computer voice,bad thing

Both of you need to work on flow and delivery.The flow was terrible for this song.I hoped y'all have improved since that song because the flow was bad.The lyrics were iight,but I couldn't really focus on them because of the bad delivery.
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Old 07-17-04, 06:56 PM   #7
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errr...limited....why would you post this.....

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Sorry...just some old shit that was never seen and thought I should release it.

Carson Jet is way better now...he is fuckin' ill. I'm better now too.
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