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Old 07-14-04, 02:23 AM   #1
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Exclamation Mjust23 Exclusive "I Suck"

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Since MistahTate said the beef was squashed im gonna be a man about it and let it go so can mistah tate and prephix take the high rode and not hate feedback yall,anyway,i decided to do something different this time here we go


"I Suck"

verse 1
(spit it slow like dr dre)

yea, u no i suck in this rap game
killin dude is the only way i could get fame
i could rap all day and yall still wouldnt no ma name
ma flow will put u in pain
cause all ma punches is lame
the way i flow is a shame
its like a bad day in the hood wen i spit
cause all ma ryhmes sound like shit
they horrible whether im in text or on soundclick
cause i sound like monkey killin a ape
the voice is so off its like im gettin raped
its like i took a shit rite before i ate
and came to the mic wit a cause
to leave breathless and then pause
not cause im sick but cause me rappin should be against the law
i flow like the guy dribbles wit bryan shaw
im bout to get so damn pissed
i aint gettin no money so all i got is rust on ma wrist
hear me and feel like u and a guy is gettin forced to kiss

hook
wat else can i say but damn i suck
every show i go to they say suck ma nut
but guees wat...........i dont give a fuck

verse 2

hell yea im back to ryhme
and all ma punches should be a crime
ur lyrics r 100 dollars but mine r dimes
i got ma sling shot,i dont pull out nines
ma lawyer is worst than syhne's
ha,im worst than the guy named ice
hearin ma flow feels like u got lice
and ma multies will leave u like jesus christ
bye bye im so not nice on the mic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-14-04, 06:07 PM   #2
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Old 07-14-04, 06:10 PM   #3
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wow u DO suck! ahhhahhhh! good to see u finally admit it! Unfortunately it is your best rhyme yet! LOL!
Prephix.
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check us out ya'll! Peace, and wun!
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Old 07-14-04, 06:16 PM   #4
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dog,let it go the beef is ova be a man and give real feedback,damn
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Old 07-14-04, 06:27 PM   #5
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it was an aiight over all rap but i do have to say that it is one of the weekest hooks i have ever seen but the actual verses were pretty nice i think that u might need help writin hooks
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