xxtacy u had better punches great structure and flow return da favour http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136023

yo.i dnt wanna beef wit u x.
i wasnt hatin im jus pointin out that ur verse DIDNT rhyme
n the reason i keep sayin that is coz its TRUE!
its your structure thats at fault...ur lines rhyme internally.....
but raw killa rhymed the same way
n all the voters sed it didnt rhyme..it aint jus me.

LOOK DIS IS WOT I MEAN..
many come and many go,u got only 12 posts,boo u still in time to quit and let go,

SHOULD BE

u only got 12 posts, many come and many go
boo u still in time to quit....and let go

UR lines need to b a similar length,n each line needs to end wit the rhymin word/words


now im not tryin ta b funny,jus tryin ta help......thats wot peeps wanna see.
so take the advice or dnt...

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i'm a give it to xxstacy for the personal points. . .

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azn i cant really reply 2 urs cuz well u didnt kno dis beggin gurl was actually a gurl but shit woulda been tight if u was battlin a guy n well xxx dude was rite da opener wasnt good but u kno im here 2 give ya tips on ya shit in da future boo but i aint givin u ur flows dat u gotta do ur self rememba practice makes perfect i call dis 1 a draw since azn didnt kno he was battlin a gurl 1 luv peace out

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^^^damn...cheating aint good son.........
more votes so we close this up............
ima beg 1ce again yo..........pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeee
ugh

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yo wdf?......vote on this bitch mayne its even old.................damn vote vote vote...........holy fuck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vote goddamnit

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ok...i hve to vote 4 anz................
simple reason is because xxtasys verse didnt rhyme.......#
not 1 line...............
theres no point sayin anythin else because the whole point is to rhyme.so
regardless of anythin else anz wins

vote-anz

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^^^ dumb and blind...the fuck u doing on the site when u repeat the same shit all the time.........i aint mad cos u didnt vote for me.......but damn yo u just a stupid lil gurl...mayne!!!!!

uppin honest votes........thanx

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this battle was not very good
azn or whateva ya name is...structure was garbage son...terrible..nice wordplay was all you had son..punches wasnt really hitten

xxxtacy mami your punches hit better but nothin to brag on...wordplay was ight..structure was not that good..but you still elevatin


vote .....xxxxtacy

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x gets it but she shouldnt have but suns fucking verse made no sense directed at a female and even though x shit was whacked at least she stayed focused on the battle at hand

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more please.............

uppin

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ima give this to Azn cause he had a better overall verse, his struct made it easier to read,he battled xxx thinkin she was a guy,
xxx shit was hard to get through it didnt flow and at some points it didnt make sense
but truthfully so did Azn's verse so Azn got this but by a hair

thanx............

uppin

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thanx

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

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