aight dawg rulez r simple:

10-16 linez
No hater/crew/ etc votez.
No feeding.
u got 1 hr when u check in...

GL dawg.

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make up your mind dog how long do i got or you spittin first
hurry up for my comp start messin up

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Aight guezz ill spit first. here we go...

yo dawg metaphor ur jus a figure of speech/
yo ryhmez u spit are juz copies of otha rapperz, u leech!/
Yez i wuz bored when i wanted to do diz battle/
tie a noose around ya neck and have u ride the saddle/
shoot my gat see how long round tha rope u can handle/
waitin az yo face turnz purple witcho eyez buldgin out/
his body hung off thiz lil rope, surrouned by a crowd/
Hey metaphor! yo live on tv u mus be rlly proud!/
u got yoself wutchu wanted, fame to be known/
Battle me again ill puncture ur brain wit yo nose bone!/
I'll take yo body and burn it like the bark on tha tree/
juz shmokin ya azz up like a couple poundz of weed/
If ya family dont think ya death wuz right and disagree/
I'll be doin drive-byz at jo house constantly/
goin back and tellin yo baby gurl dat yo dead/
end diz shit wit all the innocense and the tear shed/

aight...yo turn dawg.

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yo check it

this guy came on the battle feild equipt with a warter gun/
supersoakers will do u know good...so make like speedy gonzallis and run/
this nigga a bootleg killer...I guess we can call him the copy cat/
you can call me cactus jack...cuase im leaveing you under the mat/
living in a mansion and on tv is better than living in my honda/
we know the results of this cuase im ice cube...and you the anaconda/
if my familey disagreed it was only cause im gettin the death penalty for puttin you in a grave/
we dont need to battle again you save whatever you had to say...like a new rode u just got fucken paved/
dog like sig say im yo tutor so obey my fucken commands/
im done wit this cat now the votes is in demmand/

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my bad its suppose to be (like your sig say)

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i had to hurry dog comp been fucking up

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uppin for votes

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yo, neone gonna put some votez on dis shit?... bla bla

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Votez............................................. ....... there 50 characters Lol

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this was 16 lines vs 10?? thats wack

flow: Aznbl4ckrice
punches: tie
diss:tie

vote: Aznbl4ckrice for better flow and more focus it seems,

but having 10 lines vs 16 is wack....

can ya vote in my battle

Yo Both Of U Were Cool It Wuz A Close Battle But Meta Got It Because Of The Harder-hittin Punchlines

Azn Ur Shit Wuz Good But The Structure Waz A Bit Fucked And It Lost Its Way Around The End.
If U Work On The Structure And Some Punchlines U B Cool!

Don't Sleep On Marx
Vote Marx Vs Lyondred
Marx Vs Slugga

AZN:fav verse-yo dawg metaphor ur jus a figure of speech/
yo ryhmez u spit are juz copies of otha rapperz, u leech!/

Meta:fav verse-dog like sig say im yo tutor so obey my fucken commands/
im done wit this cat now the votes is in demmand/

basically i liked AZN's verse cause he had better flow and vocab
aslo his shit went together well

vote:AZN

yo return the favor

deilquint vs. mad stylez

1

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need more votez on dis battle...to close this shit up.

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uppin more votez for dis battle...need to close this shit.

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