My diss to those that think they are Dre and constatly claim they're at the top. You know who you are...

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I see many fools postin raps on the these forums
Thinkin theys gansters but they only got me snorin
its borin, battlin each other always out for glory
your a whore g i dont care about your story
or where you come from what ya clique ya with
i've heard it all before bro ya spittin the same shit
ya words might be different but the meanings the same
your out for a name claimin your ahead of the game
try to be original and think of something new
think you'll get signed? speak shit is all you do
raps all about diversity its constatly changin
mixed up and rearrangin, whats that i hear ya pagin?
I guess I just touched on something there bro
Now ya gettin pissed off and wanna have a go
But I roll with a different style all together
aint sayin its worse and aint sayin its better
Im down with the clown and Im down for my krown
So don't piss me off man you know I aint soft
I'm known to go off when people poke and prod

So I read and see ya sayin nigga in every rap
But I'm askin myself how many are actually black
Think your fightin turff wars youd be shittin your drawers
rollin the streets with your so called whores
I've seen it all before and its a real tragidy
Thats why i dont claim shit and expect respect for free
You gotta earn that shit put ya beats on the floor
Till your spittin so tight people askin for more
You'll take many swings most are probably gonna miss
and expect to be dissed but just raise up that fist
Because I dont give a fuck bout what other gotta say
This is a open mic forum so just let everyone play )

i dont know if you talkin to me, them "other" negros or what, but regardless i'm feelin this shit so i give you yo props, alot of people on here claimin shit they aint. i try to spit truth as much as possible though so i feel you dawg, nice drop

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

*bump*

Do I suck? Do I have flow?
What am I doin wrong?
What am I doin right?
Looking for some feed back please.

As for the "Because I dont give a fuck bout what other gotta say" by that I mean I'm gonna keep rappin no matter how bad the critisim is, though I am willing to make changes heh so hit me with it.

its flowed pretty good except for the last part of your first verse u werent really rhyming at all..however you threw in good multies and exelent flow..sothe multies made ur flow beter
overall7/10
return the favor in my open mic..its in the sig

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you wanna know if you can flow, yea you can flow, your flow is nice, your vocab is decent and your structure is aight. i give it a 8/10, now go check my shit out on openmic and drop some feedback, u cant miss it its on the front page

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

yo it started wit good flow and continued but slacked towards he end, goodverse tho