u know the deal 5-15 lines no feeding ,hate/dr/crew votes holla u can spit 1rst

he raped in a post so here it is:

ayo..i fight wit hands but u missed the tech//
i might miss ur eye but i'll get ur neck//
when my escence is aroung nigga's hit the deck//
i'm here to make my name known ang get my rep//
the gunz might be thick but the bullets is hallow//
this bitch know i cum hard he has to chew before he swallows//
its 2HARD 4 Me 2 LOSe so i'll kill this snitch//
boys stomach is empty so i'll fill this bitch//
my army march longer than the pride parade//
we go hard ya'll niggas name the time and place//
i'd love to see the day when this boy meets world//
he realizes he's pussy and he needs a girl//
lemme tell u if u lose this battl then u lose the world//
wun

thats his not mine i just posted it for him

now i spit..and best belive i got this poll in the bag lol aight lemme spit...

Mad stylez ur no good ur a comp with missing filez,

Im a take this fake mc out, without even~tryin~//
got u on the post~cryin~cause u accepted my~challenge~//
i take it u didnt~aknowledge~my ~skillz~, i got u quitin rap and back to doin drug ~dealz~//
i got a safe it~consealz~all my flows against any mc, ill take u out~e-z~as counting to ~3~//
my rymes are a mid-life ~chrisis~, is this too much for the little baby? so u admit u cant handle ~this?~//
im peggin u with one word at a time to this~flow~man im takin this vote and u dont even ~know~//
why did i get stuck vsing a ~pussy?~ caught this nigga at the whorehouse-in givin his virginity up too some guys named ~louisy~//
then i went around sayin OMG he lost his virginity at the age of ~ten~ too 3 girls That aint ~men~//
im not a joke kidd and ill tell u ~again~ and if i get provoked ull see my knuckles meet ur ~chin~//
im running this vote like a guy that stole a ~car~//(speedin and lossin cops)
so why dont u give up and go back to the gay ~bar~//

aight uppin for votes and if u dont belive thats his ryme here it is:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136600

OTHER THEN THAT UPPIN FOR BATTLE LETS GET THIS OVER WITH GOGOGOGOGOGOGOGO

aiight

2hard2see, your rhymes were in-consistant when you put in the ~words~ , sometimes they didnt even rhyme, thats aiight. you had some nice multies tho, ya personals were kinda week, the flow just wasnt that good. It looks good, but when i tried spittin that shit it all sounded stretch, You get major points for the multies - good shit not bad

Mad Stylez, you had zero personals and zero multies, it sounded like you were spittin a poem lol. That shit had some alrite flow, and some hawt punchlines but lacked almost everything else. You get points for some nice punchlines

My vote goes to 2hard2see for the hot multies good job, keep elevating guys
<3peace

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Ima have to go with Mad S. Sorry 2H2L. But da flow was inconsistent I couldnt really catch it like that. He did have some good lines and multi's but Mad brought a more gangsta concept with it and dats what I like.
No d/r to either bur Mad gets da vote.

check....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136311
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136313
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

Return da Fav.

Shout outs 2 da 9-1-9 and da 2-5-2 and my crew Mosiac
R.I.P. 2 all da falln soliders
Im still on da blok for ya "Hustle Hard Inc."
Hold me down my niggas!

iight lets break it down now

opener..Stylez
finisher..Stylez
multiez..2h2l
vocab..stylez
flow..Stylez
structure..Stylez....(2h2l slow down yur lines mayne thats waat lost u tha battle)
personals...2h2l
overall..nice battle but i think mad stylez took this..
good battle..
v madstylez

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Mad stylez vs. 2hard 2 lose

Mad Stylez took this one...but i what i really wanna know is he ready for a challenge...and yes, that means 2h2l is one of the most garbage niggas i heard

my vote 2H2L mad stylez
rhymes were really wack da
battle was completely weak
2 easy 4 2H2L probably didn't
try
v/2H2L
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138650

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138668

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138867

DON
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139290

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my votes for 2hard he had a better style easer to read and better punches

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yo 2hard to lsoe u got this hands down,

structure-2Hard2lose
flo-2H2L
wordplay-2H2L
shit evrythin went to 2H2L hands down yo battle dawg but ey yall return da favor
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v/madstyles ....good battle u guys skllz barely took dis one....he had bettr punches i like that 'chew b4 swallow line funny shit..your structure was poor though...good rhyme sheme and u should step yo vocab up.......
hard to lose nice try dawg but i think the only advantage u got on this on is yo structure ..work on yo vocab and punchlinez and you should take a battle ez...no hatin

vote on this return da favor.............................
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