deadlines:
battles go up monday
check in by wensday
verses due by thursday
votes due by the next sunday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
12 line max.
REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

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I had to get a new couch, but as you can see the fun continues!

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Damn u ganna need to feed with a spoon wit all that bowl shit u spit
U think ya crew askin if u ill,but how u feed they wanna know if its illicit(ill, is it?)
Cuz they don’t wanna be know as stealin idea’s or whole names
Oh no not jay-z’s I mean rb’s completely original blue print gang
I know u aint ganna dis me u ganna start selfglorfying sayin ya rhymes is perfectly
But that’s me u a painter and we know vango does picture,so bitch u work for me
And my godly rhymes first, fuck your family I’ll burn ya house and ya sibs
From a place where u don’t do hip hop, battling pp2 on RB how, where u ganna live?
But check it…
Ya age ova 18 but u still brand new the way ya rhymes never grew
U can’t pull threw the way ya crew support u they should list u on their W2
Musta confused pp2 for ps2 because ya rhymes more played then sony
No punch was actually for me, how much u feed, u actually speak bolony

^omg sort your grammar out PP2. Seriously use commas etc & also this sentence....

I know u aint ganna dis me u ganna start selfglorfying sayin ya rhymes is perfectly

his rhymes are perfectly? you cant end a sentence like that, you would have to say perfectly fit or perfectly suited for example. Besides this ur punches were weak & not at all interesting, it was a struggle to make it thru that verse.

Vango wasnt that strong but did enuff 2 merk PP2.

They say a picture paints a 1,000 words, but man you can't even spell
Your an empty canvas on an easel, with just the letter "L"
I've seen better comp on Star Search, and they dont even Rap
Your best bet sleep with a Hooker, maybe you'll get at least one clap

best lines...ur flow & punches were decent so u get this withe ease

Vote Vango

Ok Vango NiCe Drop. Picture Ok Drop

Opener

You got merked by Flash last week and you really want some of this
Cuz in a PicturePerfect world herbs like you just dont exist

NiCe Personals...Good Good 8.5/10

Damn u ganna need to feed with a spoon wit all that bowl shit u spit
U think ya crew askin if u ill,but how u feed they wanna know if its illicit

Weakk.....7/10

Bestline-

I peeped your battle records Kid, and its stacked like strippers boobs
How do you expect to get respect, when all you do is feed on newbs

9.2/10

Cuz they don’t wanna be know as stealin idea’s or whole names
Oh no not jay-z’s I mean rb’s completely original blue print gang

Kinda Played But 8/10

Closer


Vango is like Balco Steroids, and PicturePerfect your like Malnutrition
How can you be "Picture Perfect", when your just a second edition?

Finished Him.....9/10


Musta confused pp2 for ps2 because ya rhymes more played then sony
No punch was actually for me, how much u feed, u actually speak bolony

WTF 7/10

Winner.-.-.-.--.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.-.--.-.Vango By A Long Shot...

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Structure: Tie
Flow: Both
Punches: Vano
Personals: Vango
Enjoyed: Vango
Vote: Vango

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A crip just like Bonecollector

damnn imma vote for Vango. His spit was more tight and made alot more sense. PP2 had alot of grammar errors and the structure was terrible.

Punches: vango
Metas: vango
Multis: vango
Structure: vango
Flow: tie
Enjoyment: vango

Vote: Vango