aight no feeding hate/dr/crew votes u got half hour after check-in 5-15 lines aight lets do this

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Takin Mc's out 1 at a time, .

The Mid-Life-Crisis

aight ima check-in so i can spit i gotta go soon so drop ya hit after or whatever

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The Mid-Life-Crisis

Aight Imma Drop Real Soon Too...............................

//Dv8 i could not wait for u too accept my ~challenge~\\
//Prolly some kid that pass h-scholl but droped outta ~college~\\
//got a 2 yr olds brain in a 21 yr olds ~body~ with ~preknowledge~\\
//guys r u serious does this kid even no how to use the ~potty?~\\
//dropin flows on this fake ~mc~, he doesnt no what to even think of ~me~\\
//come-in long in hard just like i did his ~mom~\\
//do u member that guy she took to the ~prom?~\\
//it was me so what u think ~mc~ u can take my flows and then beat the shit outta ~me?~\\
//what was u thinkin to accept a challenge vs ~me~, kid im soon to be on rb's ~dream-team~\\
//so go ahead let it out! ~scream!~, im chasin u down with this g-launcher, with 6 grenades to launch at ~you~\\
//got u doin what u said that u wont ~do~, takin these losses from me u must be rlly pissed eh ~B?~\\
//well in this battle ull never catch ~me~, what ut hink ur gonna do come back and beat me? lol prolly in ur ~fantasy~\\

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The Mid-Life-Crisis

this cat was ~banned for freeposting~just days ago,
in my~moms room west coastin~you lie like pinnochio,

if i was a horse ~in this battle~this kid could'nt ride me,
he'd really~loose the handle~jus gettin trampled by me,

kid says~5-15 lines~com'on please don't you kno that rule,?
he just act~hard on rymes~end up getting tooled like ja-rule,

sportin EM n 50 "how original"prolly scared of a tattoo needle,
you ain't a "wrap"artist pasting empty candy bars on a eaisle,

interests include~dirt biking~to closed~door dyking~how exciting,
well i~strike dykes~n ~ride bikes~try ta beat me without "biting",

this kid ~copies my style~with a slash slash added like a wack newbie,
8 posts~choppy all the while~get a pillow so the falls padded lil gee,

15 years old n already hit his ~mid life crisis~ya right i jus say damn,
thats bold~~but ya lines arent rightous~"stop please" let me battle a man,

Not Very Good Battle But... Break Down

Punches: Dv8
Flow: Dv8
Structure: Mlc (if had better punches coulda made it better for him)
Metas: Tie
Multis: Niether
Vocab: Mlc

Final Vote: Dv8


Peep My Battle N Vote Fairly....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136693

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DV8verall, was ok verse, ya flow and structure were on point, and ya dropped ok punches, but not as strong as your opponent here.........try some personals
(V)id:ya flow was ok,but ya structure was kinda all over the place,and some of ya lines were stretched,BUT ya punches hit harder and you used some wordplay and the use of vocab was stronger..i liked the..first 2 bars best............................
VOTEV)id

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yo,i wish voters would do there research before they voted....sayin that i need personals..

DV Took This Wit Ease MLc Yo Shit Barley Rhymed Challenge-Collge Nononoon
Prom Mom Come On Get Creative

Open

Dv8 i could not wait for u too accept my ~challenge~\\
//Prolly some kid that pass h-scholl but droped outta ~college~\\

2/10



this cat was ~banned for freeposting~just days ago,
in my~moms room west coastin~you lie like pinnochio,

7/10

Closer

//got u doin what u said that u wont ~do~, takin these losses from me u must be rlly pissed eh ~B?~\\
//well in this battle ull never catch ~me~, what ut hink ur gonna do come back and beat me? lol prolly in ur ~fantasy~\\

Stretched Like Hell 3/10

15 years old n already hit his ~mid life crisis~ya right i jus say damn,
thats bold~~but ya lines arent rightous~"stop please" let me battle a man,

7/10

Winner- Dv8

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uppin for some votes i'll returnthe favour asap...............

2 me DV8 won diss battle
MLC's flow was off n kinda weak
so i had 2 give it 2 em
no disrespect but MLC u need
a lil more practice
vote 4 deez battles

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oh yea almost 4got
vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs 2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

murda-gram
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506

novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

peace

DV8 dominated. Punches hit harder. Rhymes were better. Structure was a hell of a lot better and flow was better.

(V) you had all of nothing on DV8. It was totally one-sided.

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its goes to Dv8'
nice rhymes man ur pretty good
u got i nice flow and yo shit
webt other like butter and jelly
man keep it up
work on ur structure u'll be fine