aiight aiight

Your wack son...like a wack job...your just Stroking for WORK.....
Till i stick C4 in ya verse to give ya PUNCHES a Step up and Burst~/~
Wrappin like DEATH i stick MATIK with Gats quick till smothered in Plastic....
its drastic How i SAVAGLY CUT YOU DOWN and leave this kid SEMI autoMatik~/~
merkin this FAgQuick....i leave more shells then Low tide at Beaches....
This kid couldn't Draw blood...even though you SUCK worse then Leaches~/~
I ignite the INFERNAl and blaze this kid with Lighting Punches....
Your gettin served in the GRILL like Applebees handing Out Free LUNCHES~/~
So come WIT it....fuck it i JUST stole ya Luck like i rip ya Clover.....
Your not Predicted to WIN this like METEOROLOGIST IN CASKITS TURNE OVER~/~

ones and g'luck

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..::iLLNess~At~All~TimeS::..
<marquee>MoreLess ya Fake in Existants like ADAM being GAY...your just Prone to Swallowing Fruit by the ROOT~/~</marquee>

new style ...

Ur Sick? Ha..No..I Check Jokes..Have You 'Acceptin Ya End' Like "Convicts On Death-Row"/
..Yes..Yo I Supress Flows..Make Ya 'Lines In Tha Thread Disappear' Quicker Than "Pressed Clothes"!!../
I Got Close Aim Dude..Ya Reign Is Through..My Spits Dissin' This 'Square' like I "Flow-Angles"../
My Blows Taint You..Have ya Body On The Ground..'Surrounded By More White'..Then Kids Doin "Snow-Angels"..!!/
..Like I Said..Punches?..Ya Whack With Them..Fuck Ya Personals..They Like 'Harmless Criticism'..They Cant "Bothe-Me"...!/
Cuz Im Gunna Have My 'Punches Pickin At Ya Brain'..When I 'Shove My Hands Up Ya Nose' Like A Fuckin "Labotomy"..!!/


this is stretched so i didnt do too many barz.
tried a new style,uppin for votes

Automatik-I loved your punches"Make Ya 'Lines In Tha Thread Disappear' Quicker Than "Pressed Clothes"!!../" nice...i gotta tell you like I do all these people..dont use the /'s make you look like an idiot..just straight drop...structures a little off...but i really liked your verse, nice

Tek-Didnt like your drop at all...spent to much time glorifyin yourself to drop good punches, elevate and take that stupid ~/~ shit off the end of your lines, I hate people that do that make yourselves look like an idiot..but like i said, elevate

Vote-Automatik

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Automatik takes this easy. He had metas that had me weak as hell. Tekneks verse was alright. He had some played out lines though about shootin gats and shit. All kinda simple and predictable if they are personals directed towards automatik(guns). Automatik wins this with punches and metas that were ill. First line had me stunned.

Vote-Auto

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ok:
tek~your punches were ok, nothin special, and you didnt use any personals either, ya flow was alright,but structure kinda threw it off, overall, i just dont think you came hard at your opponent..
Auto:you had good flow and structure, ya punches were dope here, they really landed, you had nice multies also,liked your opener and closing bars.....good verse..
VOTE:AUTO

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dayum if this ain't DICKRODE....hmmmmmmm 3 votes in under 10 minutes of your drop........fishy fishy fishy......but oh well if thats how you role then its all good....ONEZ

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..::iLLNess~At~All~TimeS::..
<marquee>MoreLess ya Fake in Existants like ADAM being GAY...your just Prone to Swallowing Fruit by the ROOT~/~</marquee>

Tek, its not called dick ride, people see the thread, they look inside, they see your drop sucked, tehy vote for Auto, you lose....it isnt called dick ride its called honest votes, if you think you're verse was really that good you have problems kid...and to call 3 votes in 10 min dick ridin is dumb as fuck...your mos def new to RB....loser

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nah aiight listen....when three people that can poll vote do it in 10 minutes.....this kid should be in elite just like the people who voted for him...i got tother battles..that only one person outta 6 people could poll vote....so don't try to deny the fact.....so get ya thoughts straight....i have been battlin on here...well the first RB the original for a long time...and i would know....so get the fuk out ONEZ

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<center>..::||TekNeks||::..
..::iLLNess~At~All~TimeS::..
<marquee>MoreLess ya Fake in Existants like ADAM being GAY...your just Prone to Swallowing Fruit by the ROOT~/~</marquee>

It takes 20 posts to vote dipfuck you dont know anything your retarded if youve been battlin for a long time your verses dont show it

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Tekken:

Your wack son...like a wack job...your just Stroking for WORK.....
Till i stick C4 in ya verse to give ya PUNCHES a Step up and Burst~/~

Wrappin like DEATH i stick MATIK with Gats quick till smothered in Plastic....
its drastic How i SAVAGLY CUT YOU DOWN and leave this kid SEMI autoMatik~/~
merkin this FAgQuick....i leave more shells then Low tide at Beaches....
This kid couldn't Draw blood...even though you SUCK worse then Leaches~/~
I ignite the INFERNAl and blaze this kid with Lighting Punches....
Your gettin served in the GRILL like Applebees handing Out Free LUNCHES~/~
So come WIT it....fuck it i JUST stole ya Luck like i rip ya Clover.....
Your not Predicted to WIN this like METEOROLOGIST IN CASKITS TURNE OVER~/~

ones and g'luck
- nice opener, good punches..great personals and good structure...




AutoMATIK:

Ur Sick? Ha..No..I Check Jokes..Have You 'Acceptin Ya End' Like "Convicts On Death-Row"/
..Yes..Yo I Supress Flows..Make Ya 'Lines In Tha Thread Disappear' Quicker Than "Pressed Clothes"!!../
I Got Close Aim Dude..Ya Reign Is Through..My Spits Dissin' This 'Square' like I "Flow-Angles"../
My Blows Taint You..Have ya Body On The Ground..'Surrounded By More White'..Then Kids Doin "Snow-Angels"..!!/
..Like I Said..Punches?..Ya Whack With Them..Fuck Ya Personals..They Like 'Harmless Criticism'..They Cant "Bothe-Me"...!/
Cuz Im Gunna Have My 'Punches Pickin At Ya Brain'..When I 'Shove My Hands Up Ya Nose' Like A Fuckin "Labotomy"..!!/

aight opener, great punches...good personals, decent structure, and a great closure.


hard to choose, but auto had a great closure.

vote: auto

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