I'm bringin Gunz Galore, shots leavin you dismanteled from chambers
...GG gone be hooked to more 'morphine' then 'Power Rangers'
So go ahead, ya spits couldnt kill if you had Gunz in ya teeth
...You just a 'hurt piece walkin' like theres 'corns on ya feet'

Fuck ya riddle's your not a gangsta so admit it Gunz your shook a little
...How you deal drugs when you thought 'movin cain' was when you 'pushed a cripple'
Only the strong survive? Then I'll deliver you a comma kid cuz u nuthin but weak
...Gunz prolly works at a 'Pizza Hut'...but still doesn't 'deliver the heat'

I killed ya before this started...No it's exposed ya aint nuthin but a whore
...It's like im cheatin in scrabble the way my words are always better than yours
This was a lock...GG is 'stuck in a well', his lyrics I brutally killed em
...'Skinned' em, 'tucked his nouns between my legs' shit I 'Buffao Bill'd' em

If ya didnt understand...'movin cain'...cain-cane (what crippled ppl walk with)

Look For The Personals....And Vote UP!

Call me a cook cuzz like my rhymes I bake ya
Only time Durmil push'd metal he was holdn a stapler
Mentally my mind brings me deadlier bars
Physically my slugz like magnets they stick to ur scars
Rap Battles know I keep a murderous aim
Do Durmil like a pet store & put his birds n a cage
Ur not a hustla- I've seen u struggle with nicks
my spots like da World Trade victims covered in bricks
I was put on earth 2 get rid of u fags
Do Durmil like laundry sort him out & stuff him in bags
We all know gunz da sickest-and since u wanna act fishy
You'll be sleepin with the dolphins nigga
U must b high when u rap ur not hot its an illusion
I blow ur guts on da mic so u can put life n ur muzik
If I catch u flossn I'll stick u up for ya gleam
Do u like an Oreo-rip u apart and take ya cream

16 bars sorry bout dat
but I couldnt end in 14 cuzz it wouldnt of had an ending

lets get some votes in here

check my otha battle:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344

vote up....leave a link we'll hit it up fairly

Opener-Durmil(power rangerz line was tight)
close-Durmil
flo-durmil
punches-durmil
wordplay-Gunz
personalz-durmil

vote-durmil (nice dropz by both)

vote honestly on deez battlez

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze

Break Down I
Name Here- Durmil Verse Was Good, Some Personals, Punches Connected.. Flowed Decently.. Wordplay Was Ok.. And Had A Couple Of Metaz... Overal Nice Verse....


Gunz Galore- Ya Verse Wasnt Bad But You Needed More Punches Than You Had.... Ya Best Lines Was The World Trade Center It Was A Nice Meta, But You Needed More Punches, Structure Was Decent, And Flowed Ight...



Break Down II
Punches- Tie
Personals- Durmil
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Durmil
Multis- Niether
Metaphors- Tie
Structure- Gunz Galore
Originality- Gunz Galore
Vocab- Tie

Final Vote- Durmil

Return Favor With Honest Vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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Durmil

I'm bringin Gunz Galore, shots leavin you dismanteled from chambers
...GG gone be hooked to more 'morphine' then 'Power Rangers'
->>hah shit had me rollin

So go ahead, ya spits couldnt kill if you had Gunz in ya teeth
...You just a 'hurt piece walkin' like theres 'corns on ya feet'
->>pretty good

Fuck ya riddle's your not a gangsta so admit it Gunz your shook a little
...How you deal drugs when you thought 'movin cain' was when you 'pushed a cripple'
->>haha

Only the strong survive? Then I'll deliver you a comma kid cuz u nuthin but weak
...Gunz prolly works at a 'Pizza Hut'...but still doesn't 'deliver the heat'
->>liked that second line

I killed ya before this started...No it's exposed ya aint nuthin but a whore
...It's like im cheatin in scrabble the way my words are always better than yours
->>haha

This was a lock...GG is 'stuck in a well', his lyrics I brutally killed em
...'Skinned' em, 'tucked his nouns between my legs' shit I 'Buffao Bill'd' em
->>funny


GunzGalore

Call me a cook cuzz like my rhymes I bake ya
Only time Durmil push'd metal he was holdn a stapler
->>decent wordplay

Mentally my mind brings me deadlier bars
Physically my slugz like magnets they stick to ur scars
->>wasnt feelin this

Rap Battles know I keep a murderous aim
Do Durmil like a pet store & put his birds n a cage
->>weak

Ur not a hustla- I've seen u struggle with nicks
my spots like da World Trade victims covered in bricks
->>cool world trade line

I was put on earth 2 get rid of u fags
Do Durmil like laundry sort him out & stuff him in bags
->>pretty cool

We all know gunz da sickest-and since u wanna act fishy
You'll be sleepin with the dolphins nigga
->>it was ok

U must b high when u rap ur not hot its an illusion
I blow ur guts on da mic so u can put life n ur muzik
->>shit was funny

If I catch u flossn I'll stick u up for ya gleam
Do u like an Oreo-rip u apart and take ya cream
->>cool closer

Durmil took this...his whole shit was hilarious. Good wordplay and good punches. GunzGalore you had some good shit in yours too though no hate.

v/Durmil


\/hit me up honestly\/

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Durmi got this and i think thats the Best Structure i ever seen i love that

Break Down

Durmi

Flow 8/10
Punches 8/10
Structure 6/10
Rhymez 8/10
30/40

Opponet

Flow 5/10
Structure 4/10
Punches 6/10
Rhymez 4/10
19/40

Vote/Durmi

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes