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Verbal Abuse 5 83.33%
KroNuz 1 16.67%
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Old 07-27-04, 01:39 AM   #1
KroNuz
 
From: New York
Verbal Abuse Vs KroNuz

IP: 3240 794D

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Old 07-27-04, 01:40 AM   #2
eph
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IP: 5867 FD83

you didnt poll it.
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Old 07-27-04, 01:40 AM   #3
eph
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nvm its up, check.
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Old 07-27-04, 01:41 AM   #4
KroNuz
 
From: New York
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yea i did lol....... check........................
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Old 07-27-04, 02:28 AM   #5
eph
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Put your sig to test, cause your slogan seems Ironic.
Especially when its being used as a personal by typed phonics.
Try logic, no need for member mugshots...youll see him in his avatar.
White boy Rockin pink, dont swet the style...at least this fag is hard.
Its funny how I can cause a suicide by a barred text.
And its histerical how this theorys not so far'fetched.
Like Scary movies in the dark, watch me shake his joints.
So desprirate to be quoted, he makes to sigs just to make his point.
My lyrics Like dyke pornos, droppin jaws.
Like haagen daz, im the flavor to mock your flaws.
stop n pause...while i run backwords to keep us even.
like the charger's record losses, ill start your streak this season.
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Old 07-27-04, 02:29 AM   #6
KroNuz
 
From: New York
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Ya Verse Has All Faults Threw, This Just A Taunt Duke, N The Only Reason You A Free Agent, Cuz Nobody WANTS YOU!/
Dont Start With Tha Gansta Shit, You Neva Clappin A Gat, And Ya Thread Said Any Expierence, By Ya Verse, I Should Be Asking YOU THAT!/
Your No Stop For Me, I Fly By This Bitch, N Ya Barz Got Kids Fallin Asleep Like That Guy In Ya Sigg/
Im Provoking And Rude, Chokin The Throat Of This Dude, N you 13-5, Cuz Most Of Them Newbz!/
You A Flop, You Lose, I Drop You, Its Not That People Dont Hear You, They CHOOSE NOT TOO!/


Uppin 4 Votes
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Old 07-27-04, 02:33 AM   #7
Magic5
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From: Denver, CO
IP: 6EB9 28C9

Verbal Abuse
structure is good...flow is on target...no multis...wordplay is decent...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

KroNuz
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...ur structure wasnt good...ur liens were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had tight multis...wordplay was pretty good...a few of ur punches connected...personals didnt connect....

Overall
KroNuz had more, and better multis...as well as better wordplay...Verbal Abuse had the better structure...the more stable flow....more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...Verbal Abuse gets my vote...

VOTE - VERBAL ABUSE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against hotshh!...thanx...
 
Old 07-27-04, 02:37 AM   #8
eph
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tahnx uppin 1-0... next.
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Old 07-27-04, 12:24 PM   #9
KroNuz
 
From: New York
IP: C1DA C961

^-uppp.............................................
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Old 07-27-04, 12:25 PM   #10
KroNuz
 
From: New York
IP: C1DA C961

lol and thats not my picture in mug shots va.. lol...
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Old 07-27-04, 03:13 PM   #11
eph
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o well... uppin Dos >.
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Old 07-27-04, 05:00 PM   #12
Durmil
Banned: Biting
 
From: Wastalands
IP: B90F 540D

this battle was okay

Opener-KroNus
Closer-VA
Punches-VA
Personals-VA
Flow-Tie
Structure-Tie...KRo divide urs up...VA try and keep similar line lengths
Multi's-Kro
Meta's & Wordplay-Nuthin stood out

Overall-Verbal Abuse...good battle tho keep at it
 
Old 07-27-04, 05:05 PM   #13
LiL HoPPa
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From: "Pistol"vania
IP: 7C15 C1EB

ThA kIng is Back, O.k verbal, that shyt was tight. You got this battle, for bettter vocab, flow, structure, Personals and Punch's. Keep up tha good shit,Peace.

v/Verbal
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Old 07-27-04, 06:36 PM   #14
tourn
Flyweight
 
IP: CAAC F470

va...mugshot line had no relivance...average verse...decent flow...one or two actual punches

kronuz.....structure was horrible...really no punches....just a simplistic verse

overall-i'm givin it to verbal even though he had a irrelivant line in his verse he still had the punches..

v-verbal
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Old 07-27-04, 07:20 PM   #15
D.A.
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From: Deep within the core of myself
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This was a nice small battle and here is my vote/
No hate on either of you/

Flow: Tie
Punches: K
Wordplay: K
Multis: VA
Structure: Tie
Overall: K

Vote= K

K had stonger punches and better wordplay thas why he won this bout to me/
His first punch and his 4th to me killed VA, nice battle/
Keep elevatin, both of ya/
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