if it was confusing thats cause i had too much to say in 10 lines, so my fault
i had started typing and ended up with like 45 lines so i had to cut back
i dont expect to win, thats not the point, cause i woulda never battled
i just want to open some people's eyes to people like him whose records indicate lyrical dominance but verses dont be too great. dont get me wrong mim, you good all hate aside, you good, but i just wish you had a more original style instead of following the same formula every battle, you win with it but u need to be true to your own style
ya lyrics still scream"I've Watched 8 Mile 45 Times". Me? Im still trying to get the hang of this but each verse i try you bring you something different. im trying 2 improve just like all of you on this site

Drop ya honest opinions is all i ask. No hate. this is hip hop

I Think Some Of That Memisis Or Whatever His Name Is Is Getting Some Swayed Votes...
But Thats Not My Place To Say...
But Ya, Ya Verse's Flow Was Wack As Fuck And Your Structure Was Fucking Retarded...
You Had Like 3 Lines In One Bar...
And Hotshh Ya Lines Were Crazy Streched But Atleast You Kept The Flow With Multies And Internals...
And Ya Potensy Of Punch Was Pretty Much Even...
So Since Punch Are At The Same Level I Gota Vote Based On Flow And Complexity...
Vote:Hottshhh!...
~One~

This was a very ill ass battle here man, Mim why you break his personals apart/

Flow: Tie
Structure: Mim
Punches: Mim
Personals: Mim
Multis: Tie
Metas: Mim
Overall: Mim

Vote= Mim

Mim's verse was better constructed, didnt look like he wrote a paragrpah or sumthin/
He had the multis on point helpin his flow, and killer meteas/
his punches hit harder and personals hit harder too/
Not includin the fact he broke up ya personals/

Mim.....hot Flooo Kidd......nice Punches.....the Only Thing Which Reall Bothered Me Was That Structure.....i Had To Read It A Couple Of Times Until I Actaully Got What U Were Sayin.....which Is Why I Gave The Vot To Hot!.......he Also Had The Hardhittin Punches....and His Structure Was Alot Better.....made It A Whole Lot Easier To Read Then Mim's......good Battle...and Much Respect To Both Of Ya..
Final Vote....hotshh!!!\
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i gotta give my vote
2 HOTSHH! i felt his
verse i lil betta it had a nice flow
n sum good punches
v/HOTSHH!
vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136749

2hard2lose
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487

ice pick
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137970

peace

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yo wat u did after his verse was pussy shit and hotshhh when ur explaination is longer than ur verse thats not a good thing

hot shhh had multis and personals and i enjoyed it more

mime you had punches but really nothin else


hot shhh is mah vote

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hotshh I liked ya verse it was nice and compact which made the flow really easy to follow. You had some ok personals and good punches.

Mimesis your lines were majorly streeetttchhheddd and that made it hard for me to follow the flow. you really lost me at the end of your lines. some of it didnt make sense...although you put forth a decent effort. some ok punches, ok personals.

vote: hotshh.

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Breathless Arresting Mindscapes

Kizza

Shy

Ruff-tuff-thug

Raw Killa

Cruelintentionz

guess my vote doesnt count. just to let everyone know, I don't vote biased. even though people may PM me asking me to vote for them. I repeat I DO NOT VOTE biased.

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B.A.M.

Breathless Arresting Mindscapes

Kizza

Shy

Ruff-tuff-thug

Raw Killa

Cruelintentionz

^ Yea, I blacklisted your whole crew.

So even if hotshh! takes this to RB complaints, it wont count, as i have a right to blacklist whoever i want.

good for you thats the 5th vote anyway
cause officially im not in a crew til they finish deciding soooooooooo
fuck you

Punches-Mim
Meta's-mim
structure-tie
enjoyment-mim
opener/closer-mim

this was an alright better you both need to elevate and use better wordplay but in my opinion mimesis came with the harder flow and better punches

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hotshh! :multis dont win battles...thats a big rule
Dont give up punches for flow, its stupid...ur verse was weak other than vocab and flow, nuttin stood out....
6/10...

Mimesis: lol, good drop...u always come wit the witty punch/personal style...and u didnt fail here...u had some stretched lines, but still a nice drop....the only line that i didnt like was the one about his city...that was gay...but other than that, good drop.

V/mimesis.

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Uppin this for someone to close it.

4-2 me.

Leave a link and ill return the favor.

Do i really need to vote i mean Mimesis definitely took this betta flow betta punches overall juss betta........
vote- Mimesis

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