Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 07:16 PM

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For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:17 PM.

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 07:18 PM.

you must have something against canadians you hating cat
this bitch couldn't come heavy if he consisted of edible fat
I understand why you name yourself Ice Pick...you ain't fire
this cat couldn't even elevate if he was at the top of a spire!

when you gonna spit

im gonna post
in a lil bit

You even on anymore

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i already did post mayn.............................................. ...................

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why dont i see your verse

did you post it in the box????????????

because i see nothing

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well im posting mine

6 to unlimited bars

i hope you spit atleast 15 16 lines

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Yo Forsaken gettin Killed with 2 styles
The Wordplay and Punches

Ive checked ya rhymes – you couldn’t “pack punches” if you “gift~wrapped~ya~fists” /
Your just a wack bitch, your skills “lopsided and sucks” like “miss~matching~tits” /
You dropping more “bad lyrics” than “micheal Jackson fumbling~rhyme~books” /
Get some real attacks faggot, or just keep mumbling~ya~mimed~hooks /



Going for The Kill
Battles against me are bad bets,
proclaim victory 1 set, without pointless death threats
Fatal like water on tha brain, Take a loss and re-think ur game
Fvck wut u claim, u sound like tarzan but rhyme like jane
Check ur position, blackout on this composition
No competition, u on a kamikaze mission
Wit no ends or drops, illegal like tha black cable box
Ur rhymes are like mimes acting... No props
Or shook cops, somethins definitely wrong
U like tha little b!tch in tha hands of this lyrical king kong
Ur gone, handing down beatings like an abusive mom
My flow like an all Jordan team, a full proof scheme
Hittin without lookin like mah name wuz Prince Naseem
Scaring emcees like ghosts, representin all coasts
The Mods should make a section strictly for mah posts
Say wuteva u want, but jus dont eva call me wack
Ur verse wuz like a bad "MaMa JoKe", and thats a fact

wtf^^^^I stated 4 lines only in bitchslapped mayn...

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Voted For: For$akeN

Battle Verse 2--- Your Verse Was 16 Bars.... But None The Less Its Acceptable With The New Rules.. First Set Of Bars Was Decent And Flowed Good, Structure Was Good And Punches Were There But Played...... Second Part Was Completely Down Hill

Battel Verse 1--- Your Verse Was Short But Had Better Quality Punches For The Fact They Werent Played... Structure Was Good And Flow Was Decent.. Tho More Would Have Been Better... You Won By A Hair..

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On top of a spire

Fuckin wack ass fuck

KroNuz man you vote for people who have been on this site longer than me, You always do

Uppn for real Fucking Votes

His shit was FUckin wack ass FUck

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Upn for votes

Serious votes 2

4 bars or lines that would be a wack battle

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Voted For: For$akeN

forsaken gots my vote cuz of hard punches and nice flow

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