2 years ago my girlfreind was preganant an she gave birth nealy 4 months early to my son, he died with 7 hours of being born. i wanted to write this to help me an maybe others dealin with loss.


Hook
i hope peace keeps dreams to ur vision as with heaven u rest//
the angels sing joiced with vioces to curess//
make u laugh as only a childs laugh can be described//
to bring tears of joy emotionally fuelled with the pride//
the loss is so hard so wrong i couldn't be part of ur life


verse 1
is it sorrow dedicated throw an imotional plea~askin for god to bring a second back of my son with half a breathe see my son look at me then he sleeps//
his eyes so open with the gate to the heavens all things to bring inner peace//
closed his eyes never to wake but take his place within heaven as past relations deceased help create//
doctor tell us ur'd never be free to walk earth as young with ur age with a life so care free//
everyday i see ur face an hate the fact that like so many parents who los there child wish'd they'd gone for them like that wishin god jus took me//
17 acceptin that my life was to further but turn the way of my thinkin like a nightmare watching the life so lost forever lay there so hurtful//
what can ur daddy tell u bout him~those few hours you layed there was the happiest/scariest few hours my whole life had seen//
an i'm forced to watch as the doctor walks to your crib~tellin us to keep you alive would be torture but this decision will haunt yah//


Hook
i hope peace keeps dreams to ur vision as with heaven u rest//
the angels sing joiced with vioces to curess//
make u laugh as only a childs laugh can be described//
to bring tears of joy emotionally fuelled with the pride//
the loss is so hard so wrong i couldn't be part of ur life//

verse 2
2 years since you left now~still like a knife throw my heart with no sound the silence still scars//
not to far but watch what i think is were u sleep in clouds with joy as only a child can bring//
turn back the forward rollin of the times an maybe find a time to shy as watching ur eyes look mine straight into a kind framing of my life//
i walk forward facin each an every passing day~within mah heart is its ocean in hoping an showin that ur meanin everythin i say//
every corner of my heart shaped to the letters of ur name~ every mornin begins the maurnin of every day i see ur grave//
every day i see ur face~the sweetest soul i know an saw you risin to our lord//
was meant to change my ways~instead now chained to cain~people seein me killin me softly~gots me see everyone lookin at oddly//
got speach as the las thing left void this cancer in my soul~think i'll sort myself for the gracfulness of eternity of being together forever in safeness of gods home//

Hook
i hope peace keeps dreams to ur vision as with heaven u rest//
the angels sing joiced with vioces to curess//
make u laugh as only a childs laugh can be described//
to bring tears of joy emotionally fuelled with the pride//
the loss is so hard so wrong i couldn't be part of ur life//

verse 3
don't think i could forget~but mus protect mah head an whats lef of mah time//
sort my life an make it sumthin not always to depise~losin you i felt like i lost my life//
in time i'll rise to the door an walk out with a smile but till then i walk on but now its fighten the pain no more hatin in denile//
2 years maybe whats awhile but i'll take the time i need to get my eyes to sleep without seeing that final second ur body breathed~time to face that i am me//
this verse i shorter in the words but in turn i tell you were my life is goin an maybe were we'll end~with that the tear smears this fear an i think its time i should mend//


Hook
i hope peace keeps dreams to ur vision as with heaven u rest//
the angels sing joiced with vioces to curess//
make u laugh as only a childs laugh can be described//
to bring tears of joy emotionally fuelled with the pride//
the loss is so hard so wrong i couldn't be part of ur life//

This was a real heartfelt emotional drop man, i liked this a lot, you had good flow and of course the content was deep, this would make for a great song, if you do audio, and i'm sorry for your loss, but it is a nice inspirational piece.......good job

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thanx man

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danm dog, u really really drop ya heart on here?? i felt the emotion were HIGH AS HELL i FELT WHAT U WAS SAYING THE FLOW WAS HOT THE LINES WAS GREAT THE TOPIC WAS DEEP CUZ I LOST MY BEST MAN TO A SHOT IN THE FACE WENT TOT HE HOSTPITOL TO SEE HIM CRYED MY EYES OUT AND THE NEXT DAY THEY PULLED THE PLUG CUZ HE WOULD OF BEEN LIVING AS A COUCH POTATOE AND IT AINT FUNNY AT ALL, cuz just saying it is bring back old hard memos i cant ever forget dogs so if ya little one did pass away early IM SORRY TO HEAR THAT, 4-REAL cuz i got a 3 year old and I WOULD DIE MY-SELF IF SHE PASSED AWAY SO I FEEL YA MAN...

this gets a 10 outta 10 it was just perfect to me noting need it to change at all...

dont forget dog 4-real i fell ya sarrow

thanx effect, i needed to drop this it was burnin away i needed to tell showin my pain an hopefully tap into the readers pain so like me they can look for 2morra, sorry to hear bout ur friend homie.
peace

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yea that was nice man. I know how good it is to get somethin off of ya chest by puttin it in song. I felt ya emotion the whole way. Ya lines was a lil stretched but you made up for that by what was in it. keep doin what ya do man and stay strong
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thanx duke man much love

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yo cuz I like tha structure on this. Plus I think you real as hell fa showin yo emotions. keep doin wah chu do cuz an go things will happen

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maki my boy you nearly had me crying......
thats was pure emotion in motion..lotta respect for this drop.......
sorry our crew did'nt work out.....
you got some mad skills though....keep up the good work....
mucho respecto'