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Old 07-31-04, 02:15 PM   #9
Vango
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Who invited him here? If theres no herbs in, then who's he?
Guess Karl wanted to be honest when he first named the tourney.
ok punch, nothing special
Cause his bars are 'fucking soft', like sex without erections.
Thats why this battle's one sided like the next presidential election.
played
Your verses straight up ass, like a fat women wearing tight thongs.
Even putting Vodka in party drinks, won't help you make your punch strong.
like this punch, lol

I could water this herb and watch his skill not even grow.
because L.I. couldn't coin new lines, placing money in pay phones.
decent punch
You and this career don't match, like nuns being nudists.
....and about as important to rap, as the pope is to budhists.
ehhhhh
He's destined to lose this, like cults I'll be choosing his faith, but still.
.....he named himself L.I. just cause he's the exact opposite of I.L. (iLL)
_____good closer_____________
not your best stuff LI


Set him a near impossible goal of greatness like this is dr. phil...
His name already paints the picture.. how he's still pursuing skill...
no,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Obvious hes an Old RB reject trying to hit it big like that herb Rascal...
But he'll get the same thing.. a nice record but merked by vets wit no hassle...
okay punch
Ill knife his neck.. as i slice and dice his body, like its a horror movie...
And have him shakin in trama .. like he was Cash Money booty...
bad,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Whats the point of him living.. i mean i wouldnt care if this kid died...
Since after i met him.. i understood why people commit suicide...
okay punch
This kid aint got the nuts.. seriously nothing is matured or grown...
And how could he write deep.. when his voice aint at the tone... (his age...)
blahhhhh
Get yah ass out of here.. you aint wanted, and thats the truth...
You just got beat more then dicks of kids of your youth...
not good

vote-Percept Shun, for better punches and better overall verse.
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