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Eps 5 100.00%
phatinum 0 0%
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Old 08-01-04, 01:44 PM   #1
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
Eps vs phatinum

IP: CD35 672F

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Old 08-01-04, 01:45 PM   #2
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Old 08-01-04, 01:50 PM   #3
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
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Yo wossey I never knew you had a 9 inch pussy
Leave this dick battle im a eat you alive like phat
Just ripped ya skin off in overdrive it looks
like you gotta nerves twitch in ya eye when I spit lyrics
You just fall and die you’ll understand ill make ya cry
Ill break ya legs make ya wonder y you gonna choke
Ill freestyle you blind you is a bitch and I keep the rhymes
You is a suicidal failure like saddam Hussein understand
Phats the game fool ill kill you with my crosses and chains
Ill b like David blane the unstoppable put ya to shame
Spit gasoline to my breath ill just spit flames I just came
Now im gone I might of lost 4 battles but this ill make ya strain
Im in ya brain Im a technique that you cant improve
Ill spit till ya lose ill leave ya brain dead burred in my shed
nigga there’s no coming back your the only one to blame
im out i think you bettea stop cause your lyrics com lame
 
Old 08-01-04, 04:00 PM   #4
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Old 08-01-04, 04:01 PM   #5
Eps
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ill crush you sadistically, statistically and lyrically //
do my own conspiracy, im lyrically inclined //
im like Jasmine Guy, cuz this is the "PERFECT CRIME" //*
ill win by KO, 1 finger bein taunted //
you like Jamie Kennedy, far as you get is "MALIBUS MOST WANTED" //
i merk fake niggaz like you and leave em' haunted //
ill eraticate ya name outta the rap game //
like Ja Rule, when he found out that 50 Cent's came //
take your faggot ass back to the past before you challenged me //
you can't beat me bitch, you aint got the tendency //
leave the site, give a dq you better off, make your attendence read an absency //

*-Jasmine's the star of the movie "Perfect Crime"

aight yo light ya shit up....
 
Old 08-01-04, 04:05 PM   #6
Eps
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IP: 1D1F 3277

thats sounds a lil firmiliar dog...hmmm doesnt it RIFF RAFF?

"nigga there’s no coming back your the only one to blame"
 
Old 08-01-04, 04:06 PM   #7
Eps
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ok i guess we both posted then, nvm aight lets get some votes
 
Old 08-01-04, 04:57 PM   #8
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
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what the fuck you on nigga bout i took riff raffs line you a crzy nigga ive only faced him once and he stole lines
 
Old 08-01-04, 05:24 PM   #9
Myster.E
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Voted For: Eps

Eventhough, I preferred Phat's verse Eps wins because he had more punches but Phat had more personals. Phat the structure at the start wasn't too good but toward the end it improved.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
Eps don't put '//' at the end of your lines it's newbish i used to do it and you don't have to accentuate your punches and a word of advice get harder hittin punches I saw one line you ripped from 50 then you referred to that Ja 50 thing. come off that it's dick ridin bigtime. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
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Old 08-01-04, 05:27 PM   #10
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
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votes uppin here cmon niggasss
 
Old 08-01-04, 05:35 PM   #11
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not bad....phatinum this was a little better than your other verses.....keep tryin
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Old 08-01-04, 05:38 PM   #12
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Voted For: Eps

phatinum i seen u come better then this, u had a decent ok flow ya punches was preety weak, ya diss was preety decent and u wasnt that creative with this verse u lacked in this battle fam,

6.5

eps this is the first time i seen u battle but, u had a nice flow some good hard hitting punches u was very creative and had like 1 diss that wasnt that bad as-well nice drop...

8.0

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Old 08-01-04, 05:41 PM   #13
phatinum
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From: tha ghetto
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fck you intesify effect you bite more lines then a shark
 
Old 08-01-04, 05:41 PM   #14
Eps
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IP: 1D1F 3277

yo i didnt mean any hate to you phatinum, that line was real close though,i didnt say you bit..but still..uppin fo votes
 
Old 08-01-04, 06:20 PM   #15
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Voted For: Eps

yo dawg good battle but i gota say that Eps takes it he jus took ova lyrically and his vocabulary ws more intact but good battle yall
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