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10 2 15 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 02:13 PM

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OrientalDun has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 02:14 PM.

Yo ok I'm going tear this cat apart
Going against me aint smart rethink before u go against
The chink you a light weight I'm spitting while u sitting
Like a camper Da prodigy betta scamper when u read this
You'll be shitting your pampers this kids name is played Out like SPORTS BLOOPERS you getting pulled over like in
SUPPER TROOPERS I'm amazing blazing right past why u
Tring to be from MOBB DEEP run you ova with a jeep
And keep at it till u screaming if you think you goin Win U must be dreaming after this u going get an alias
Like DR. JERKLY you'll be shun more than URKEL i'm
Abusing you I'm using my own lines from my mind
I'm curising don't be mad cuz you losing to the Asian
It an invasion you wack more then wasians this verse Was Gentle son don't be mad cuz u lost to ORIENTALDUN

Your turn dawg lets hear it


Yeah my sturcture sucked

Da Prodigy has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 02:48 PM.

yo/u might as well get the jumper cables
cuz i'll keep u in shock....
he gets sunned so much his skin hard as uh rock...

dude dont wana battle..he better at givin head...
he keep dick in his mouth like sharpeners full of lead...

he's no good at battlin...im sorry its not uh gift...
he needs ta get his bars up like his "face" needs "lift"..

his head will stay down....while he listens 2 his defeat...
he's writin ma bars down so ask's me 2 repeat...

he reads ma first verse....an thinkin im shitty in mind...
untill he see's his's is first an mines the last line....

uppin

uppin

uppin this battle

we have no votes lets getim in

Voted For: Da Prodigy

lol one sided..

Da Prodigy had Structure, Flo, Vocab, personals, n at least it was able to be followed, no hate to the other homie but, jus elevate lol

Return the fav prod:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141355

Voted For: Da Prodigy

Oriental- Some Ok Metas, Wasnt Feelin Your Structure Or Your Punches, Flow Was Ok

Da Prod- Punches Hit Harder, Wordplay Was Ok, Structure Was Better And Flow Was Ok

Punches- Da Prod
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Da Prod
Metaphors- Oriental Dun
Originality- Tie
Structure- Da Prod

Final Vote--- Da Prod

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Voted For: Da Prodigy

what the fuck is going on in here?!!! can i see one decent battle tonight?...

da prod... ya rhymes are elementary... no hate but ya need to step ya game up big time... the only reason you one this is cuz o-dun can't rap! his structure straight fucked my head up... i got dizzy tryna read that shyt... you had way better structure but all ya lines were wack and played... you skated on thin ice with this one but ya pulled it out... ya'll need to practice... with a tutor... before you ever put up another post

uppin this shit