Battle Rules:

15-20 lines
no crew votes
no d/r votes
no biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-07-04 at 10:05 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Tookute4u has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 10:06 PM.

lyricalflowz23 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-04-04 10:08 PM.

fuck the pen and paper
ima freestyle raper yall be servin me like a waiter ima emcee extermanater
ill hit u with lyrics that burn
so lyricflow dont start rhymin its still my turn
you wasted like a fifty year old druggy
your rhymes is ugly
so dont even front me im illmatic
you can even pick up my ryhems through statik
u'll be comin back for more like a crack addict
try to rhyme like me u'll be rejected and disrespected
like vanilla ice expected your flows are neglected
wats your excuse wat u distracted
thats exactly wat i intcipated
my rhymes will show u they demonstrative
and alwaze uniquely created kno yall hate it imma rapper
in her prime i'll blow u up like a land mine decapitated
in no time now u feelin pussified u shakin are u petrafied
or maybe terrified ill spit words that are undefined
ill hit u with a nine and comit a first, second, and third degree crime!!!

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

Flow - Neither
Multies - Lyrical
Wordplay - Lyrical
Stucture - Tookute
Punchlines - Lyrical
Personals - Neither

I think that lyricalflow had a stronger verse.. his lines stood out more and he had punchlines. Took didn't have any, and you rhymes were basic Took. Lyrical flow also had a better operner and closer, so Lyricalflow, U get me vote..

Return favor with an honest drop in mines will u? thanx

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138974

Voted For: lyricalflowz23

Cute: Ehhhh..You Had Some Aight Shit....But You Was More On A Flow Session...You Aint Really Hit Wit No Punches And Shit...But Nevertheless Descent Verse Ma..

lyrical: Now Ya Punches Were Better...You Stuck On Dissin Her...Instead Of Jumpin Off And On Like She Did...Descent Verse Though Man....

RETURN THA FAVOR!! THANKS!!

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

aight well you came harder much harder.........

punches were pretty well done some connected...
flow was str8 better than his wasn't choppy but
it was a lil stretched in my opinion..............
originality was decent nothing special but still
better...........soooooooooooo!!!!

vote: lyricalflowz23

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Voted For: lyricalflowz23

I vote for lyrical....He had better punches...Other guy just didn't bring it hard enough

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