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Old 08-04-04, 11:58 PM   #1
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This is How I Feel

IP: 3E4C EA5E

this is how i feel
im ready to kill
or ready to take my own life
cuz all i knew growin up was suffering and strife
I'm havin suicidal thoughts and my brother's on anti-depressants
that's why this shit's got me stressin
Ima be the last motherfucker breathin
makin sure these bitch-ass cowards stay permanently sleepin
a po' ghetto town is all we seein'
im gon be the last motherfucker breathin
I grab the blunt and I take a puff
cuz the world is cold and I dont give a fuck
my life was a storm, my pops left me out in the thunder
dad was gone, mom at work, raised by my brother
My soldia is the only one rollin wit me
fuck this life, the whole world's against me

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Old 08-05-04, 12:10 AM   #2
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didnt like it 2 much... work on ya flow and structure... needs some creativity in there...

elevate...
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