House Rules
Spit what you spit
I'll flow 10-20 lines.
No hating, feeding and all that.

Aight post 10 mins. after checkin and dont let this battle fadr.

god it’s true my key’s rattlin-ya-written\
it’s like a mack truck….battlin-a-kitten\\
dismantlin’-ya-spittin ya flop-twice\
ya body’ll be the only thing ta drop-nice\\
ya shot-swipes but ya still-herbed ya couldn’t come direct if you were steven spielberg\
think ya ill-nerd get eaten like grapes from gilbert\
ya ain’t senseless at least ya feel-hurt\\
but ya still-worked like an immigrant\
ya bringin the crowd down like they was impotent\\
you couldn’t spit-a-hit of acid off-ya-tongue\
I always shine over you but I’m not-the-sun\\
one shot-ya-done but I didn’t pop-the-gun\ I just cock-my-tongue treat ya like pantyhouse you’ll drop-or-run\\
stop-the-fun this is so-easy but until I drop my drawers ya blows won’t-please-me\
don’t-tease-me\\
ya verse was a joke-right ? like ya joined the dhali lamma now ya won’t-fight\\
I don’t-write ta post-type, though I am the great white you still get the most-hype\
Step in ample's-site when my scope’s-tight I’ll put ya text ta my ass for a slow-wipe\
Grimreapr prays I go-light but I ain’t on-a-diet\
there’s a thing called rhyming you, gotta-try-it\\

slick man ur rhymes r wack.\\
wen u been freestyle wut u must of been on crack.\
by the way u aint even slick.\\
change ur name all u do is suck dick\
ur rhymes so shyt so dont even whine.\
i could be spittin out ice and still be burnin ur linez. \
you aint a professional so wut you sain\
you think your good, well you better start prain\
you a shame to this rap game, so y da hell you playin?\
your worse then bad, u a shame to those u call fans,\
yo man just coz they watch u rap dosent mean u all that\
probabley means that just wonne get a good laugh\
coz they probabley think that ur life aint enough\

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uhhh dude?!?

aight uppin for votes let close this battle out. thanks

Since I am the True Grim Reaper of rhymes, I will vote on this battle.


god it’s true my key’s rattlin-ya-written\
it’s like a mack truck….battlin-a-kitten\\
ok punchline, but didnt swing hard
dismantlin’-ya-spittin ya flop-twice\
ya body’ll be the only thing ta drop-nice\\
not hard hitting and used the word "ya" to many times
ya shot-swipes but ya still-herbed ya couldn’t come direct if you were steven spielberg\
think ya ill-nerd get eaten like grapes from gilbert\
I like the first line, it would have hit harder if you switched to two lines
ya ain’t senseless at least ya feel-hurt\\
but ya still-worked like an immigrant\
ya bringin the crowd down like they was impotent\\
not good at all
you couldn’t spit-a-hit of acid off-ya-tongue\
I always shine over you but I’m not-the-sun\\
Another one that was not good, just keep on working at it
one shot-ya-done but I didn’t pop-the-gun\ I just cock-my-tongue treat ya like pantyhouse you’ll drop-or-run\\
Nice try at word play, was really good
stop-the-fun this is so-easy but until I drop my drawers ya blows won’t-please-me\
don’t-tease-me\\
could have sounded better without the tease me part
ya verse was a joke-right ? like ya joined the dhali lamma now ya won’t-fight\\
I don’t-write ta post-type, though I am the great white you still get the most-hype\
ok line but too much self glorification
Step in ample's-site when my scope’s-tight I’ll put ya text ta my ass for a slow-wipe\
Grimreapr prays I go-light but I ain’t on-a-diet\
there’s a thing called rhyming you, gotta-try-it\\
Ok closer

Unfortunatly, GR needs to work on everything. If you both want to see how a Reaper really does it, peep this battle.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128066
You cant vote though, cause its in elevated. You both really need to work on punchlines, wordplay, and word usage.

V: MC

Good luck both of you.

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Grim

Can I please get some votes in here, like the rest of my baTTLES, I'm doing the two for one deal.

My opinion Reap came hard like a fuckin porno shoot, nah....
But over all this was a one sided battle to me. Reap took all in the categories that we tally off of such as
Metas
punches
struc
personals
and creativity.
My vote stands...

I think that mc's reaper came alot harder and connected wit alot of punches....vocab and wordplay was good and had sum real nice multies in there too.
So my vote is for mc reaper................

I Say MC won this battle ... i like his style better ... he had some goodlyrics