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08-03-04, 12:45 AM | #1 | |||||
I'm So Punny
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Middleweight Contendership Match- Com(2-0) vs. Raw material(2-0)
IP: 95FF 1D86
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battles go up monday check in by wensday verses due by thursday votes due by the next sunday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 20line max. REMEMBER in your check in thread you must edit it with 5 vote links, if not you will be subtracted a vote every time you are missing a link!!!!
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08-03-04, 04:54 AM | #2 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
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08-03-04, 07:55 AM | #3 | |||||||
The New King Of New York
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IP: 7168 AA48
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08-05-04, 08:35 AM | #4 | |||||||
The New King Of New York
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IP: 7168 AA48
I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles. But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try, Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die, This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs, And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com. With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile, I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child. You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten, Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten. |
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08-05-04, 11:26 AM | #5 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth
Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended You put your life into this battle .................................. so its only fitting you should end it Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole and that is a sonning.. like i had to try. |
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08-05-04, 12:07 PM | #6 | ||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: 80EF 45DD
I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles,
We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles. decent opener But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try, Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die, ahh just okay This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs, And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com. nice personal With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile, I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child. not good You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten, Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten. not a good closer This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf not good Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended You put your life into this battle .................................. so its only fitting you should end it nice punch Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet decent I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal okay Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole not good close batte, i give this one to raw material based on better punches and personals. not your best stuff RM, com your verse was decent but not enough personals. vote- raw material
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08-05-04, 01:24 PM | #7 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole ^that won it 4 me. Vote Com |
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08-05-04, 01:28 PM | #8 | |||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
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so his ONE personal.. (which wasnt a personal anyway.. it was a nameplay) won the battle for him??? jesus christ.. kids these days.... |
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08-05-04, 05:03 PM | #9 | |||
Flyweight
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IP: B6B2 3C4D
Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat
But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet niiiiiice v) COM
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08-05-04, 05:23 PM | #10 | |||||
RV SPOTLIGHT, GET AT ME!
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IP: AA51 3382
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FIRST OF ALL CJ HAD A BETTER OVERALL VERSE, YOUR PUNCHES WERE PLAYED INCLUDING YOUR CLOSER. NO HATE MY OPINION, PEACE.
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08-05-04, 06:04 PM | #11 | ||||||
COLD
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IP: 5671 DBDD
aight i liked com ender better then raws and his flow was better ,he had a few aight punhces but none that impressed me.raw your flow was hard to follow but you had a fire personal in the second bar a good ender and alot of good disses and thats what won this for you.
vote-raw material
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08-05-04, 06:18 PM | #12 | ||||
Yes I Know
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IP: CCAE A7E8
fuck this shit.... sign me out... the voters on here don't know a good line from a wack one so whats the point?? his verse was pure garbage... his punches were basic played and mostly pointless... this site is FULL of newbies.. and how can people who cant write a decent verses themselves be expected to vote on these battles?.... fuck it.. i'm out.. pz
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08-05-04, 07:48 PM | #13 | |||||
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Come had better punches and a better flow
This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf Nice 1 7/10!! Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended You put your life into this battle .................................. so its only fitting you should end it Good 6/10!! Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet Hot Shit 7/10!! I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal Allright 5/10!! Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole Nice Finisher 8/10!! 33/50 Raw Meterial nice personals but that dont just cut it I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles, We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles. Good But Strechted all lines Strechted 7/10 But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try, Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die, Weak 5/10 This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs, And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com. Weak 5/10 With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile, I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child. Good shit 6/10!! You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten, Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten. Good Finisher 6/10!! 29/50 V/CoM
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08-05-04, 11:52 PM | #14 | |||||
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Raw Material- Flow Was Good, Punches Were Decent, And Wordplay Was Ok...Personal Was Good But Just 1 Or 2 That I Know Are Real (Dunno Bout Melested) And Red Dot Com Was Decent
Com- Flow Was Good, Punches Were Good, Ass' Line Was Good, Metaphors Decent.... Overal Good Verse Punches- Com Personals- Raw Flow-Tie Wordplay- Raw Metaphors- Com Structure- Tie Originality- Com Final Vote---- Com
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08-06-04, 12:13 AM | #15 | ||||||
Alias... Ya Know?
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IP: 91C6 F02A
COM
This fag is all about freestyle....so spit what your worth Bitch better knuckle down and stop your face hitting turf Not feeling it... Compare yourself to me? your mistakes are now amended You put your life into this battle .................................. so its only fitting you should end it Decent Yeah i noticed ya league record... yeah you havent been beat But like fake ghost hunters I've just snatched ya clean sheet Liked this. I''m killing this moron... I'll gnaw his verse till its terminal Go say you're better than me.. its just a fake personal Ok but weak Got no chance to come out first.. with that basic wack flow Theres more chance you'll be behind me.. than my asshole Nice Raw Material I can smell your fear, and i know I got you sittin' on pins and needles, We all know the only musicians to come out of England were the Beatles. Decent. But you wanna pretend to be an M.C., and that's okay, you can try, Your verses dig your own grave, like you get on here ready to die, nah This is like a war of words, and one-sided, whateva you drop just bombs, And I got madd shots aimed at your head, you must be the red-dot-com. Not feeling it. Weak. With a kidd who's lyrics are so laughable, People wonder why you never smile, I know you picked up the drugs to numb the pain of bein' molested as a child. Not feeling it but was okay I guess. You like a cartoon, you won't die, regardless of how bad you get beaten, Remind me of the RoadRunner, you only cause you're scared of bein' eaten. meh. Vote - COM. Feeling his verse more, harder punches.
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