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3-decent keep elevatin 5 62.50%
4-great job keep doin ya thing 3 37.50%
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Old 08-02-04, 09:39 PM   #1
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Post Mjust23 "Force"

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mjust23-lets go

Verse 1
(spit it meduim speed)
unabashed wit some equipment......tek shell bottles im equip wit
so crazy wit the passion..........hata's i be slashin
sex partys i be crashin.........tracks i be mashin
ma cd's they be lastin............blunts and seeds im passin
slang ma stash wit a passion..........bitches and ho's i be amassin
crazy ill wit mass appeal...........come to daddy wit sometin master feel
slide in door wit penatration..............and glocks u be facin
while da cops spacin..............and heart pace racin
while da pussy be chassin...........i be lacin nines to put a case in
supa nova im the realest..........im in the hospital survin as the illest
put up a smile then dress to the nines.........Light Ass then read the LA Times
u can cover ya own crimes..........but ya cant touch mines
express ma mind through ma ryhmes
ma hood is like dodgin through mines.............ma lyrics express feelin wit lines
skoo these kids and educate............warren was first now i regulate
strappin wit ma nine so watch ya fate............time ya death so dont be late
straggle u then show no remorse
no use for guns niga feel ma force
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Old 08-02-04, 09:41 PM   #2
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I'm feelin ya flow papi....altogether....NICE! Keep it up! Really feelin it!
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Old 08-02-04, 09:42 PM   #3
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Old 08-02-04, 09:43 PM   #4
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thanx......uppin
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Old 08-02-04, 09:56 PM   #5
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man it was str8 need 2 elevate and then u will b str8
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Old 08-03-04, 07:18 PM   #6
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Old 08-03-04, 07:37 PM   #7
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It was ok,nothing too special.Kinda ABC at times but ok.
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Old 08-03-04, 07:44 PM   #8
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Old 08-03-04, 09:03 PM   #9
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Old 08-04-04, 04:38 AM   #10
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it was aight needs work pc
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Old 08-06-04, 09:06 PM   #11
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Old 08-06-04, 09:57 PM   #12
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still up up uppin
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Old 08-07-04, 07:05 PM   #13
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was aight...never seen shit writin like that before...i was feelin it...jus elevate
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Old 08-07-04, 08:39 PM   #14
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ima fan of word play it was iight
so crazy wit the passion..........hata's i be slashin
sex partys i be crashin.........tracks i be mashin
u crazy
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Old 08-07-04, 09:11 PM   #15
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it was ight. flow was ok, but the wordplay n structure need work. stay up
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