Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

allright no prewritten shit cuz we can tell

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-08-04 at 10:24 PM

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Fr3MiSoul has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:02 PM.

**FLEx** has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-08-04 10:03 PM.

ayo, go get me my hand a gun, so i can send this punk back to canada
dont even spit punk bastard flex,tryin to rhyme with the best/
who u think u are?go back to white castle kumar, u'll b hurt wit 2 bars/
whose in charge?/me, ima beast with the gift of speak/
go home and get back to beatin ya meat/
with ya uncle p.diddy/u wont b as lucky as 50/
cuz u wont b alive after this gun gets empty/
no reason to come back quickly, i ended ur shit with the line wit p. diddy/

You're wanted for murder and I'm about to close the case//
i can rite my name all over this crime sceen and still won't leave a trace//
i don't like animals but they call me Ace//
when nature calls, I break yo shins and piss on your face//
you might wanna watch from someone who can teach//
or get shit on like seagulls at the beach//
my speech, is complex and above your status//
your "flex" is so small, and your mouth is the fattest//
you use other mens joysticks just to play//
you get more wood in your ass than Arbour day//

Yo the minimum is 10 lines you retard............but Props to you anyway

lets uppin the votes

o my fault... it said unlimited so i wuznt thinkin.. my fault props 2 u 2

lol doesn't bother me.... uppin the vote in hear people

Voted For: Fr3MiSoul

Blah Horrible Battle, Barely Any Good Punches Were Thrown On Either Side, And Flex Didnt Throw Any, He Said Hell Spit In Frems Face, And He Has A Small "Flex"...

Punches- Frem
Flow- Frem
Wordplay- Niether
Metas- Niether
Multis- Niether
Originality- Tie
Structure- Tie

Horrible Battle

V- Frem

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ight, i'll work on it, thanx for the constructive criticism

If You Want Constructive Critiscm, Here Ya Go.....

Example
Say Someone Was Makeing Fun Of You At School Or Anywhere, You Would Think Of A Diss Back Right?, And You Want That Diss To Be Truthful So It Hurts More, Well Same Thing In Battleing, Think Of Things You Know About The Person Your Battleing, And Diss Them, Also Have An Equal Flow, Dont Just Say A Diss, Make A Diss That Flows Good, Hits Hard, Is Truthful, And That The Reader Will Understand, Also, Dont Bring Mainstream Rappers Into Your Verses, Its Been Done Many Times, Try To Be Original And Witty...

There That Should Be Enough To Help You Out For Now...

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Voted For: **FLEx**

flex- iight punches and some wordplay, ok flow.. some stretched lines but overall it was iight..6.5/10
fr3misoul-ur lines were very stretched and ur punches didnt hit to hard, u had a personal on where he was from but it was weak..6/10
v/flex

ight thanx... i'm new, but that did help alot, i'd like to check out 1 of ur battles, just 2 c wat a good battle rap looks like

return the favor.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140464