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Check in by: 08-12-04 at 11:01 AM

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Damage Control has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:02 AM.

EmerginMc07 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 11:02 AM.

iite i will spit first, n wil get dis battle over wit

u wana battle? wat da fuck is rong wit u? u must b goin insaine,
bones startin to rattle, my ryms guna get u, in dis battle wat u hopin to gain?,
wit a 9 in my right lookin to kill here u cum redy to have yo brains spill , dont think i will?
im a sharp knife u a dull drill ur gettin scared now can u feel da thrill? ur scared stiff ur jus standin still,
yo blood will flow on to da screen like a seaboard right thru da keyboard shit u got da voters n me bord,
yo shit is old like a used ford n mine r sharp like a new sword yo dawg u need help find da lord,
u a thug since when?, u need a religious bath gota rinse agen, damage control finnaly admitted he's gay amen!,
u finally came out n decided not to stay in, u cum out wit a grin, den behind u cums out a man,
dis clown to easy dawg bilieve me ur ryms r like nails on a chalkborad n mine r smooth n breezy,
he loves dick n begs "feed me" like a fuckin stray dog sayin "keep me" n den his dad answers back "please me"
hes ben around, actaully hes ben down, n noooo it wasnt a pussy that he found,
wit a princesess crown n a bitch gown dis dude cudnt figure out a verb from a noun,
fuck man i dint want to destroy u n im sure yo boss dint wana unemploy u n im sry my ryms had to cloy u,
n guess what dis battle will annoy u, like wen yo dad decided to ploy u, n oo yea 1 more suprise ppl dont enjoy u,


yo yall let me no wat u think of that, jus wanted to try dis 1 out, iite dawg spit dat shit n afta he done doin his lil rym, im uppin dis shit for votes!

heres my verse

call me a teacher cause im givin this kid a lesson,
while his lines are like play-doh it'll be easy for me to stretch em//
somebody better bless em, cause his defeat will come with ease, and the only way you'll ever get "a head" is down on your rusty knees//
it seems to me you took me as joke and carried me lightly,
but by now i can tell your curled up in a corner saying "I'm frightened//
like the grim reaper when you die you've obviously ran out of luck, this kids punches dont effect and like kanyes' two words "You Suck"//
i deliver multis and tons of belligerent vocab, this kids lost this battle like an easy to pick scab//
and its a drag that i really have to waste such lines and valuable time,when hotness compared you couldnt even heat an iron//

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good luck lets see what you got

definetly not my best but we all have some off days uppin for votes

iite we uppin vor votes dawg!!!!!!!! lets go ppl vote on dis

Voted For: EmerginMc07

I felt Emirgin a bitt more in this one, i think he took it.

Check ma battles and give an honest vote

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IM BACK BITCHES

we still uppin for votes, lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

iite dawg can we get sum votes? i left da link evrywhere? cmon man

uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!upin!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Voted For: Damage Control

Aight i liked Both of yah Verses, it was a pretty tight battle, EmerginMC07 you had alot of punches but they werent very hard, you gotta work on re-wording them to make them be more effective, yah lines were kinda strecthed also, but yah had good Rhyems, and i could see what you were trying to get across.. DAmage control you had good Structure, and yah Flow was tight, yah punches were aight, Not that hard, but a inch harder then EmerginMC07 and thats what decidely took the battle, Good Work guys, keep at it

Damage control takes my vote!!!
No Hate, Just Stating..


Peace!!!!!

Return the Fav, on one of my battles!!

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fuck you

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man uppin this thang for votes les hurry and up and get this shit counted