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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-11-04 at 02:52 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 02:23 PM.

!Mc Merc! has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 02:26 PM.

man if i cant get votes imma keep goin at it
stay MERCin these problems like its all mathmatics
i added it up, and nothin goes to MERC
so i guess i won this battle, put his face on a shirt
im way too advanced haters dont get what i say
well imma keep it simple yall niggas is gay
MERC i saw that you voted for my battle tryna give me props
actin like you know me, you cant connect a DOT
yo shit is all scribbles like yo hand dont work
ill read it out to site MERC just got MERCed

short and to the point
yo mind work too slow
call me the 5 minute assasin

your a dumb muthafucka, for wanting to challenge me
you have no chance, you bout to see immediatley
i have to be honest you suck, you shit is grotesque
after this battle you'll be back to ya mamas breast
i lyrically wip you, so you learn the manditory basics
you'll never win the battle its you against me face it
you got no skills, less then jack that fell of the hill
after this battle niggas know who made the damn kill
i write half ass, cause you less then a quater
my wordplay hurts ya brain, its called lyrical torture
i'm a tell ya now this battle is more then shit
but you'll never win cause ya ounches neva hit
you talking like you got it, cant even get sum ass
your like a turte lifes going ahead of you to fast

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Voted For: DOT

They Was Both A Lil Weak, Step Ya Game Up Ya'll

Punches = DOT
Vocab = Mc MERC
WordPlay = DOT
Multies = None

DOT Got My Vote, Even Tho Mc MERC Dropped A Longer Verse, DOT Made Me Take Note Of What He Was Sayin In His Rhymes So I'm Votin 4 DOT

Return The Favor n VOTE On My Battles Ya'll!!!

ELEVATE Ya Rhymes n Ya'll Will Be HOT ASS Emcees

!!1!!

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Voted For: DOT

idk tight battle honest cant say to much but dot gets it
mc merk is to much of a herb tho lol he is a good spiter prob better then me but he talks like hes the real shit he thinks he is better then class-sic put to gether nu uh no way we'll merk you buddy lol dot gets it good punches merk good punches dot flow mcmerc flow word play dot wordplay no mcmerc tight battle peace

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

kinda weak battle but Merc takes it

Both verses lacked any kinda wordplay or metaphors. It was all basic rhyming. Both flows were good but Merc took it easily with his punches.

DOT.....im way too advanced haters dont get what i say
well imma keep it simple yall niggas is gay
/\/\ that was WEAK as hell, improve your punches

and also, DOT, you seemed to have used the word MERC too many times in you verse.

Anyways you've both got potential, just take a lil more time and be a lil more creative

So my vote goes to Merc for overall better punches

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Voted For: !Mc Merc!

yo man ya ryhmes was nice n ya flow was ok but ya punchlines was pretty good i like da 1 line bout his momas breast lol
vote=mcmerc

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