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08-12-04, 07:30 AM | #1 | ||||||
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My Life
IP: C42D B99B
(Talking)
Yo Black Cat blood this is my life blood this ones my life are take you from start to finish this is my life blood Verse 1 age seven blood mums is sick docotors say she might not make it through bodys rejecting the drip and theres nothing we can do Blood she made it they sent me to live in boarder school maybe only for a week or two This life consists of smacking up boys and sneaking food Im on the phone mum can i come home in a week or two Theres nothing we can do kinda keeps me beating dudes Like Oi Nigger come here who you speaking too? under this anger teachers think theres a decent dude And once in a while i'd smile and knuckle down But in this town it was a curse to be seen as soft And hoildays at home was no better My brothers annoying and my mums a stressing cuz theres no cheeder But deep in my heart i know she was a go getter The only time we had some DOE's when my brother died hey yo that dick i wished i'd fucking stabbed him I saw the moves plus i heard the screams my uncle got murdered My aunt got wifed up by some murder teens Them yardies with scars on there face keeped them burning clean So dont tell me in my life i aint ever been hurt (Shouting)(x3) This is my life BLOOD Verse 2 Age thirteen shit got excessive the beats got agressive The truth boarder school called it abuse n they sent me out to live with my dad All i could think bout was the trips and fun at the weekend Throught out the transformers and the cinema trips i couldnt see How much my momma stood for me when she had me she knew she could And when she was pregnant have me blood she knew she would But when your young you dont understand what the stress can do But know shes got i finally got the message 20 came And i done felt plenty pain me and my man hustled And learned how to play the game and then they came What?paper of course finally we had some money to floss some queens heads to toss YO then we quickly moved to thousands Brought some rides and moved up out of council houseing My man started whileing you should see the gold he had on him We busting thoughts bottle before you know what it was So fuck holding honours we live a secret society type of code of honors In this life its so dishonest seeing these demons Its so real when you seeing me eating i can count on my gang Becuase they wanna be seeing me eating Trust me that bust me thats why you aint even seeing me breathing beleive me (Shouting)(x3) This is my life BLOOD Verse 3 Age 21's the hardest of days picked up afew sharp wounds blood A couple of scars along the way made some money lost it Drove afew new cars in the day bust cases lived on the run Saw afew bars on the way mum died while i was in prision In them situations the voices you hear up in the dark you listen Hit the road blood and set myself a misssion like fuck this Im gonna be dead or im gonna be rich the way im hustleing Oh mum i wish you could see this for real i already learnt what greed is And now i truely understand what the breed is n the seed is To find yourself 'n' create a legacy showing the things u never seen And rest in peace to the dead soilders in every dreams Im gonna roll like a legend and this flows for you london And that just myself pledgeing offen asking me questions? bout where my flows headed(Laughts)to a road to the charts when my album drops blood just make sure you attending a wedding (Shouting)(x3) This is my life BLOOD |
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08-12-04, 03:04 PM | #2 | ||||
Still Sick
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IP: 2242 65E9
Im going to be truthful.
lyrically, this isnt a good peice. but the thing that makes it good is the emotion you put into it. and the pain you are going through. and if you just knew how to word your shit, it would be extremely better. keep droppin man, and keep putting that emotion. just elevate with it. pZ.
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08-12-04, 06:58 PM | #3 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: C42D B99B
Thanks
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08-13-04, 01:04 AM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5ACB 43F6
ur shit was good , lots of emotions and shit, keep it up ,peace 1luv
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08-13-04, 06:40 AM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: D405 DABD
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08-13-04, 07:26 AM | #6 | |||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
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08-13-04, 07:54 AM | #7 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: D405 DABD
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08-13-04, 08:20 AM | #8 | |||
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IP: CCAE A7E8
Wel.. your heart was in the right place
Man i dont know how i would feel if my mum was sick... it's got alot of potential i think you need to elevate but your doing good bro.. You still 21? but you need to get a better rhyme struc.. like bust me and belive me dont rhyme home boy but it was aiight ima give it 7.1/10.
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