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...God... 5 71.43%
String9487 2 28.57%
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Old 08-13-04, 12:50 AM   #1
Hitchcock
 
String9487 vs ...God...

IP: B9AB 64CC

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Old 08-13-04, 12:58 AM   #2
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...God... has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 12:58 AM.
 
Old 08-13-04, 01:05 AM   #3
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String9487 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 01:05 AM.
 
Old 08-13-04, 01:33 AM   #4
Hitchcock
 
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yo u cant't see me, like a pain in ya vision
if u GOD, then u can bet im changin religion
if we both got the metal lets dance
but u'll wind up in the dirt like the vegetable plants
i come sick wit it every time i drop
no infra-red for ya cuz ya rhymes not HOT
but forget about how the ruegers blam
cuz GOD "flow" about as well as the Hoover Dam
yo i got mad connections, n u lack perception
i'll send ya ass roamin like bad reception
my way is dope, while u relay for hope
if u GOD, then why u gotta pray for votes??
u betta reckognize, when u see the weapon rise
that shit will make this punk nigga TESTIFY
that im the betta guy
n im more of a MC than u is what my text implys
u lights n the camera, but neva the action
keep on comin bet we gon b clashin
dog u new to this, u not used to this
u get multiple shots to ya humorous
rather ya fibula, dog i get rid of ya
evicted out ya home at RAPVERSE i cant live wit ya
u extra weight im about to drop some pounds
only way u on the streets is if i knocked u down
but fuck u, im movin on to real ventures
cuz i wouldnt BITE ya rhymes wit a pair of steel dentures
u a MC that i dont try to botha wit
punk bitch, who mo pussey than a ginacologist
I aint done dissin so stay tuned ya bitch
watch me CAN this wack MC like some tunafish
the number one spot, u dont hold that well
got the Mitchell n NEss glock it "throwback shells"
i dont play around u get split wit axe
u get hit in the legs now limp wit that
eh this guy just admit the fact
that GOD gon need ALLAH n BUDDHA to win this match HAAAAAAA
i wouldnt sweat u in a sauna.....
test me if ya wanna BITTTTCH
 
Old 08-13-04, 01:43 AM   #5
God
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From: Crip City
IP: C56C 93CC

To rhyme on your level bitch i'd have to be asleep...
On weed, OD'ed on E and LSD...
Don't fucking come to me with your pussy jealousy...
I'll sell a key, go tell a 'G' to just cap your ass...
I'd do it myself, but fuck jail 'B', i ain't going back...
It's a fact, your rhymes steam cause that's what terds'll do...
Small limp-dicked faggot got to duck to piss...
Better stab me in the eye quick, cause after reading your shit...
I'm bout to do it to myself, faggot, don't jock my dick...
There ain't no skill behind your name if you count both people...
Like Blair Witch you got me wondering why there's a sequel...
You scared of evil, riding up under your skin like a needle ...
I'll promise i'm your biggest fan and take you out like a Beatle... Set all jokes aside, like your rhyme book when I read it...
Accept it, I'm terminating this cat easier than a vet visit...
I'm God, Bring the dopeness in bags to suffocate you...
Everybody on the forums hate you and degrade you...
Escape to, foreign lands where G rocks grandma pants...
The ceiling is the only place you'll ever find fans...
Leave your body lost in Hills like Beverly, do it cleverly...
Your endeavor resulted in your surrender, G...
Thinkin' you dope, gimme a break, you fuckin' suck...
You couldn't see my ass if I caused a full moon to erupt...

well since im done, ill drop good luck ...
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Old 08-13-04, 01:51 AM   #6
Hitta
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Voted For: ...God...

This was an okay battle

String-your verse was garbage.....didnt really like your shit and you ha alota lines.....punches was wack and really fucking sad....structure really sucked you need to elevate on that a little bit and your flow wasnt that good either... keep elevating

God you took this easly with the punches your structure was better and you flow was good also.....keep it up man
 
Old 08-13-04, 01:56 AM   #7
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uh ok w/e u say hardhitter u people still dont understand the structure but ok uppin for votes
 
Old 08-13-04, 02:10 AM   #8
Ill-Grammatix
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From: Flatbush, Brooklyn
IP: EFDF 488F

Voted For: String9487

yo... this was some loonnnnnngggg shyt.it almost didn't keep my interest. Yo G... ya might wanna change ya name.... i thought you'd be much better than what you were... ya first bar was on point but everything after that was ... well... blah!

I guess ya structure was ok but ya rhymes.... poor choices... no originality or creativity... boring to read... no meta's or multi's, no personals or hard-hitting punches... just work on it

String had me laughing for the most part... not the greatest verse I ever read but it was quite amusing...lol...that shyt with..."admit the fact/ God gonna need Buddha and Allah to win this match"... that's some funny shyt! i gotta give it to string but ...yeah... it was a lot harder to judge than what I made it out to be... G almost won but his verse bored me... if he woulda spiced it up a little he woulda won.
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Old 08-13-04, 02:51 PM   #9
The Black Plague
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From: Detroit
IP: 5CAD C028

Voted For: ...God...

Close battle in my mind, but God takes this in my mind, he had a more consistently strong verse... String ya verse was nice, but it was up and down to me, like ya opener was tight, but ya next line was weak.. It was kinda like this trhoughout ya verse, up and down... God you had nice punches, a nice rhyme scheme too, and ya personals connected too, even tho ya struc was off u flowed nice... String you also had nice flow, but your weak punches trhoughout brought down ya verse, not a bad drop just inconsistent... V/ God
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Old 08-13-04, 04:12 PM   #10
Hitchcock
 
IP: B9AB 64CC

uppin for votes holla at me wit n honest opinion *********
 
Old 08-15-04, 12:04 AM   #11
KroNuz
 
From: New York
IP: 3240 794D

Voted For: ...God...

String- Some Good Punches, Flow Was Decent, Didnt Like Structure, Some Good Metaphors

God- Some Good Punches, Flow Was Good, As Well Didnt Like The Structure, But Better Than Strings

Punches- Tie
Flow- String
Wordplay- God
Metaphors- String
Structure- God
Originality- God

Final Vote--God
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Old 08-15-04, 12:26 AM   #12
IllmaticStatic
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Voted For: String9487

this was a weak battle but my vote goes too string cause he came with somewhat of a punch and meta and a personal so for actually having a punch v/string
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Old 08-15-04, 12:41 AM   #13
CPR
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From: Boston
IP: F2E1 2D3F

Voted For: ...God...

this battle was good for both sides sick flow was ok punches where good the whole shit was good stayed consistant to the cause (work on some multies though)

string you packed those punches and your flow like sick was ok, but what i didnt like about your stuff was you started strong kinda fell in the middle and then seemed like sort of a come back in the end, like you had punches then went self glorifacation in the middle this a battle stick to punches personals if you got any and some multies no one cares about how great you are.

for consistancy my vote is:

sick ill cell.
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Old 08-15-04, 12:57 AM   #14
~Luciano~
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From: $.W Detroit
IP: D135 D6AF

Voted For: ...God...


yo u cant't see me, like a pain in ya vision
if u GOD, then u can bet im changin religion
if we both got the metal lets dance
but u'll wind up in the dirt like the vegetable plants
6/10
i come sick wit it every time i drop
no infra-red for ya cuz ya rhymes not HOT
but forget about how the ruegers blam
cuz GOD "flow" about as well as the Hoover Dam
7/10
yo i got mad connections, n u lack perception
i'll send ya ass roamin like bad reception
my way is dope, while u relay for hope
if u GOD, then why u gotta pray for votes??
6/10
u betta reckognize, when u see the weapon rise
that shit will make this punk nigga TESTIFY
that im the betta guy
n im more of a MC than u is what my text implys
6/10
u lights n the camera, but neva the action
keep on comin bet we gon b clashin
dog u new to this, u not used to this
u get multiple shots to ya humorous
5/10
rather ya fibula, dog i get rid of ya
evicted out ya home at RAPVERSE i cant live wit ya
u extra weight im about to drop some pounds
only way u on the streets is if i knocked u down
5/10
but fuck u, im movin on to real ventures
cuz i wouldnt BITE ya rhymes wit a pair of steel dentures
u a MC that i dont try to botha wit
punk bitch, who mo pussey than a ginacologist
6/10
I aint done dissin so stay tuned ya bitch
watch me CAN this wack MC like some tunafish
the number one spot, u dont hold that well
got the Mitchell n NEss glock it "throwback shells"
5/10
i dont play around u get split wit axe
u get hit in the legs now limp wit that
eh this guy just admit the fact
that GOD gon need ALLAH n BUDDHA to win this match
5/10HAAAAAAA
i wouldnt sweat u in a sauna.....
test me if ya wanna BITTTTCH
3/10

Ya punches were played and simple and ya structure was kinda stretched and off
Ok wordplay
Overall 50/100


To rhyme on your level bitch i'd have to be asleep...
On weed, OD'ed on E and LSD...
Don't fucking come to me with your pussy jealousy...
6/10
I'll sell a key, go tell a 'G' to just cap your ass...
I'd do it myself, but fuck jail 'B', i ain't going back...
It's a fact, your rhymes steam cause that's what terds'll do...
Small limp-dicked faggot got to duck to piss...
Better stab me in the eye quick, cause after reading your shit...
7/10
I'm bout to do it to myself, faggot, don't jock my dick...
There ain't no skill behind your name if you count both people...
Like Blair Witch you got me wondering why there's a sequel...
You scared of evil, riding up under your skin like a needle ...
I'll promise i'm your biggest fan and take you out like a Beatle...
7/10
Set all jokes aside, like your rhyme book when I read it...
Accept it, I'm terminating this cat easier than a vet visit...
I'm God, Bring the dopeness in bags to suffocate you...
Everybody on the forums hate you and degrade you...
6/10
Escape to, foreign lands where G rocks grandma pants...
The ceiling is the only place you'll ever find fans...
Leave your body lost in Hills like Beverly, do it cleverly...
Your endeavor resulted in your surrender, G...
6/10
Thinkin' you dope, gimme a break, you fuckin' suck...
You couldn't see my ass if I caused a full moon to erupt...
7/10
Overall better wordplay and better punches
ok wordplay
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