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Old 08-16-04, 02:41 AM   #1
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yo you aint gonna like wut i have to say now
i'll come and blow you mutha fuckin brains out
igga shut it before you fuckin get laid out
you gonna blasted on and not lasted on
you'll look super with a fuckin caskid on
i'll rap foeva even until dawn so shut son
lets get the AK's and gats out of the back
and lay out the mutha fucka that talks back




yo ppl this shit aint done cuz i'm too tired to finish it it'll be finished lates
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Old 08-16-04, 02:46 AM   #2
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Old 08-16-04, 02:55 AM   #3
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ok its wut you think
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Old 08-16-04, 08:08 AM   #4
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yo view my shit yo
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Old 08-16-04, 08:38 AM   #5
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nice shit yo man that was tight
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Old 08-16-04, 08:50 AM   #6
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^wtf?
this shit wasnt tight.
this was short, wack and garbage.
elevate man.
get a solid topic, and stick with it.
you have slight potential, but this peice wasnt good at all.
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Old 08-16-04, 09:07 AM   #7
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yo man thanx foir the advice shit
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Old 08-16-04, 02:30 PM   #8
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c'mon ppl view my shit
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Old 08-16-04, 02:37 PM   #9
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Old 08-16-04, 03:22 PM   #10
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i dont need to hear that twice
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Old 08-16-04, 10:15 PM   #11
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Young_gun that was fun and it was real. But it wasn't really fun! Ha Ha. Sucka
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Old 08-16-04, 10:30 PM   #12
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listian dog, u couldent lay out a child
yo rymes are weak, u jus in denile

not talkin about that, place wit the pyramids
catch u slippin boy, the gun placed in yo ribs

then, when they carry'n yo fuckin caskit-
ima do ah drive by n let them hoes have it

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Old 08-17-04, 03:35 AM   #13
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yo lets battle take your shit to the rings mutha fucka lets do it.
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Old 08-17-04, 10:32 AM   #14
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Not feelin it all that much dawg u need to strengthen on ur topic and increase the wordplay but i feel you have potential don't listen to herbs who jus say GARBAGE coz they prolly can't make anything better than that
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Old 08-17-04, 10:41 AM   #15
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thanx man if you read wut i replyed i dont care wut they think my mind is on feed back so they can hate all they want i dont hate haters
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