Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting No heat No beefin

Minimum posts to vote: 12

Check in by: 08-16-04 at 12:56 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

natedogg has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:30 PM.

Soulless has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-16-04 12:32 PM.

ok this guy aint no mc he doz not get notin tosay a bout me we can stand up to this person and all his frinds cuz thay are weak and the lost link cuz that cant tell what he his cuz he is si ugly and i am so hot ever girl whats me but i ask one out for u but she said no and than she died lol cuz she look at u you suck so bad the girls say yuck when thay she you you cant flow like i can dude that is why i called u out and than u said u cant drop 6 lines in 45 mins you suck but next time you can set it up wimp and i am a pimp that is what your girl said she called you a wimp and me a pimp cuz i got so muck bling bling on it makes me work with a limp and it akes me look like a pimp byt weat you i to look like a pimp l dont cuz i am a pimp i cant mall no more park get out in get all the girs dogg dont be mad at me that is all i no lol lol lol you cant get one girl even if she was the most uglys girl their was punk you r puk red bull is a punk an all his frind and your frind are punk cuz you smell like a sunk i am white punk with so much spunk lol can you bet that? punk and red bull if u see this u r next!!!!!!

---..::: this dude challenged me so….:::….---
*key*

--Explainations--
*.. Natedogg can only sing hooks… not a real lyricist
**he has 5 losses and NO wins


Change ya name to puss… cuz one Touch and ya shook.-...geez!
So take my advice on versus Nate…and just stay on the hook-please!!!!*
I think your just ‘sick in the head’… for challenging-me
Cuz I’l quickly make ya loss record turn into…two plus three!!!**
Ya skillz is garbage, why should I try its like ya verse is a rental
With unexciting credentials, should put this dog back in a kennel!!!
My computer just fucks up… when its forced to read-ya-trash.
Your verses match your avy…stuffs just a Piece-of-ass!!!
I‘l just key the kill, …. Sit back I’m not make’n u wait-long.…
Best punch u could come up with is revealing… your not really NateDogg!!!

Sonned!!!



ONLY DROP 10 lines please not unlimited

^ was that your verse or a paragraph...??....


uppin for votes i guess.....

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Voted For: Soulless

DUDE AGAIN NATE WHA THE FUCK WERE YOU THINKIN

SOULLESS GOT HIS EASYILY,
Change ya name to puss… cuz one Touch and ya shook.-...geez!
So take my advice on versus Nate…and just stay on the hook-please!!!!*
I think your just ‘sick in the head’… for challenging-me
Cuz I’l quickly make ya loss record turn into…two plus three!!!**
Those lines koed nates who VERSE

NATE WORK ON YA PUNCHES WORDPLAY AND VOCAB

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Voted For: Soulless

Soulless got him easy. He had better structure,harder punches, and good multis. His verse also RHYMED, which is kinda a key factor in a verse. Nate, you self-glorify yourself too much, and why you keep duckin' my challenge?
Vote - Soulless

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Voted For: Soulless

i ma fuckin god...nate dog wat are u sayin....u have the vocab of uh 2 year old....no punchlines....tha flow wuz fukked..it wuz put 2 gether bad..and tha personals u had didnt ryhme...soulless took it with his first bar...he had better personals that actually ryhmed an better punches..no hatin or anything but u need ta elevate nate........

v/s
return tha fav on uh battle plz

Voted For: Soulless

structure: soul
punches: soul
personals: soul
enjoyed: soul
vote soul

soul cam harder nate was weak and was just a paragraph

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