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Old 08-16-04, 06:24 PM   #1
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Whats my life like?

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Verse 1
so Whats my life like My lifes like something that don't work right
Its like an acholic sipping a red stripe
Its not enought but it might help his thirst
But he can't wait for the next can to burst
And whats worst is he don't know when to stop
Till he's over the top and his worlds spinning
And his body takes a drop to the floor 'N' its RAW
And whats more is he wants more to pour
Till he's woken up with his kidneys feeling sore
He's left wondering what was it all really for?
Just like a brother who's been fighting another man's war

Verse 2
Whats my life like?its something what a sharp knifes like
Something that might cut up your hand if it aint held right
And it don't make sense to hold tighter neither
The tighter you try grip me i will only cut you deeper
But hold me down the right way and i will work for you
Are do as you command me to are leave people hurt for you
Wipe me down and leave me free from stains
Like the memoarys of yesterdays pains that still remain
Are stay close to you only know by afew but stay unseen
See your enemys won't know me and you got a deal
And when its time to come out are forever stay real
Are live by the sword and defend by the sheild for real
Thats what my lifes like

Verse 3
So whats my life like?Its something what a crack pipes like
Something that tastes sweet but don't make you act right
It might have you on the streets on a late night
Searching for the paper to forfill this addictive nature
It makes you feel like the world hates you
But you want it to help you 2 make you feel greater
Your paronide dealing with your friends 'n' foes
Going thought lifes experience dealing with the Hi's 'n' low's
The doors close and nobodys there except me with a madmans stare

THATS WHAT MY LIFES LIKE
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Old 08-16-04, 06:53 PM   #2
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nice creativity within your flow,,,,Im feeling that
You an word man holding it down,,,
9-10,,,God bless all,,,1
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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

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Old 08-16-04, 06:55 PM   #3
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i'm feelin it man , good everything sturcture was nice how long dat take you to write? good word structure and everything , basically all around good , pure genius if you must nice work check out my to face the lord
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Old 08-17-04, 05:40 AM   #4
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uppin
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Old 08-17-04, 05:47 PM   #5
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uppin this shit
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Old 08-18-04, 11:44 AM   #6
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show some love 'n' drop some feedback y'all know u wanna
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Old 08-18-04, 11:58 AM   #7
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My rhymes blend nice like thin ice on lakes you could
Sink and drown if you don’t think sound in the hood
Boss lover with soft rubber condoms, girls say all good
So I twist lace and misplace panties kiss to taste candies
Stem facts that impact on ribs like a girdle best hurdle
This, some say rum and wines sometime combines fashion
and blind passion with sex appeal
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