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08-16-04, 06:24 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Whats my life like?
IP: C42D B99B
Verse 1
so Whats my life like My lifes like something that don't work right Its like an acholic sipping a red stripe Its not enought but it might help his thirst But he can't wait for the next can to burst And whats worst is he don't know when to stop Till he's over the top and his worlds spinning And his body takes a drop to the floor 'N' its RAW And whats more is he wants more to pour Till he's woken up with his kidneys feeling sore He's left wondering what was it all really for? Just like a brother who's been fighting another man's war Verse 2 Whats my life like?its something what a sharp knifes like Something that might cut up your hand if it aint held right And it don't make sense to hold tighter neither The tighter you try grip me i will only cut you deeper But hold me down the right way and i will work for you Are do as you command me to are leave people hurt for you Wipe me down and leave me free from stains Like the memoarys of yesterdays pains that still remain Are stay close to you only know by afew but stay unseen See your enemys won't know me and you got a deal And when its time to come out are forever stay real Are live by the sword and defend by the sheild for real Thats what my lifes like Verse 3 So whats my life like?Its something what a crack pipes like Something that tastes sweet but don't make you act right It might have you on the streets on a late night Searching for the paper to forfill this addictive nature It makes you feel like the world hates you But you want it to help you 2 make you feel greater Your paronide dealing with your friends 'n' foes Going thought lifes experience dealing with the Hi's 'n' low's The doors close and nobodys there except me with a madmans stare THATS WHAT MY LIFES LIKE |
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08-16-04, 06:53 PM | #2 | |||||||
Light Weight
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IP: 28AD 5545
nice creativity within your flow,,,,Im feeling that
You an word man holding it down,,, 9-10,,,God bless all,,,1
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My level of battle is your problem. Not minds. So dont toss me till to you tried me. This is my ring. You cant box me. I'll drop rocky. I've climbed the mountain's Making all contenders obsolete. All you bitches is running like water fountain knocking me!! Defeat list Young Beezy out come:5-o Lost Battles:none out come none |
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08-16-04, 06:55 PM | #3 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 95EB 880F
i'm feelin it man , good everything sturcture was nice how long dat take you to write? good word structure and everything , basically all around good , pure genius if you must nice work check out my to face the lord
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08-17-04, 05:40 AM | #4 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: D405 DABD
uppin
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08-17-04, 05:47 PM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: C42D B99B
uppin this shit
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08-18-04, 11:44 AM | #6 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: C42D B99B
show some love 'n' drop some feedback y'all know u wanna
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08-18-04, 11:58 AM | #7 | ||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 005F B7E2
My rhymes blend nice like thin ice on lakes you could
Sink and drown if you don’t think sound in the hood Boss lover with soft rubber condoms, girls say all good So I twist lace and misplace panties kiss to taste candies Stem facts that impact on ribs like a girdle best hurdle This, some say rum and wines sometime combines fashion and blind passion with sex appeal |
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