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08-17-04, 05:47 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Hypnotized-song. check it out, yo
IP: A66F 4613
yea, don't hate, i do different stuff, and someone wanted me to write it, you kno who you be , so I did. Don't hate. Gonna be an audio song.
www.soundclick.com/spul Beat is called LOve type song, beat. I didn't mean to do... the things that I did Didn't want to hurt you, and on our love, put a lid But I couldn't help, the feelings that I had The joy that I felt, now makes me sad Girl, believe me, my feelings are tru Girl, it's plain to see... I still love you But everytime I try to call, you won't pick up Now the smile I used to have, won't stick tough But I can't blame you, after all that I commited Didn't stay tru, our love I jus forfeited I left you jus like that. Threw our love out the window Said I'd write back, but I never grabbed a pen, though Deep down I hope you forgive, cuz I want you back I'll head down where you live, and make it up in the sack For you, I'll always fight, no matter what you say or do When disaster strikes, I'll be there next to you (girl) (chorus) In the past... I made some mistakes Snuck behind yo back, girl,to you, I acted fake But while I was gone, I finally realized That I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized I never ever thought, that I'd miss you so much But tryin' not to think of you, boo, was so tough Your beauty's got me stunned, got me mesmerized I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized The next day I saw you, walkin' down the street Wit a shirt that was blue, and high heels on yo feet I ran so fast, jus to get to ya side Felt like I had a mask, cuz when you looked, you had no smile I tried to say somethin', but then you began to cry That made me feel like nothin', deep down inside I then asked you out, but you simply walked away No words out of ya mouth, you jus left me there to stay I suddenly felt weak, and my knees began to bend I had the feeling, like my world was gonna end But then you came back, and you said that you was sorry I apologized to you, but you told me not to worry I caught a tiny smile, shinin' from yo face Lasted for a while, all in good taste I then tried to talk, but you didn't care You jus grabbed me by my neck, and kissed me right there (chorus x2) In the past... I made some mistakes Snuck behind yo back, girl, to you, I acted fake But while I was gone, I finally realized That I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized I never ever thought, that I'd miss you so much But tryin' not to think of you, boo, was so tough Your beauty's got me stunned, got me mesmerized I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized yea, uppin' for feedback. weerd. pc |
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08-17-04, 05:55 PM | #2 | ||||
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 403D 72A8
i liked it it was cute
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08-17-04, 10:29 PM | #3 | |||||
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IP: C1DA C961
this was a nice drop man, i liked the chorus a lot, you could turn this into a song, it would be nice, your a good writer, nice shit,keep it up....
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08-17-04, 10:49 PM | #4 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A66F 4613
haha thanks, and yea, it's gonna be an audio. Jus don't have time this week to do it, cuz of b-ball camp. uppin
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08-18-04, 12:41 AM | #5 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
lol ya that was pimped will pear lol nice saying cute but ya spul hit some more open mics i like yer shit man how did you and triple n and phenom make that song blazin do you live in the same city?
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08-18-04, 12:41 AM | #6 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
yer spul right?
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08-18-04, 07:33 AM | #7 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
yea, I'm SPuL. And nah we ain't from same City. I'm from Mass, Triple from NY, and Vendetta from western Canada, I think
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08-18-04, 01:36 PM | #8 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
how you record that song then? lol thats confusing
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08-18-04, 01:39 PM | #9 | |||||
Light Weight
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IP: 646D CD48
nice
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08-18-04, 01:46 PM | #10 | |||||||
~Mr. Punch-Lines~
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IP: 5043 32F4
dope is vendetta lives close to me later when im better and got mys tudio i could go see him lol j/k but maybe idk
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08-18-04, 06:07 PM | #11 | ||||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 29C5 FEBE
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yea, we recorded vocals and sent it to Vendetta. And Vendetta fucked up my flow. figures. But yea, the vcersion where my flow is right is on my soundclick, but the quality sucks cuz I'm usin' a shitty mic, like 4.38 or somethin' like that. |
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08-18-04, 11:31 PM | #12 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 33CA 27F2
uppin...
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08-19-04, 06:05 AM | #13 | ||||||
New to RB
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IP: 5043 32F4
yea dope shit man 7/10 vocab hit me and what will a pear said it was cute lol
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08-19-04, 08:10 AM | #14 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 33CA 27F2
aiight, thnks for feedback, y'all. uppin...
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08-19-04, 09:04 AM | #15 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: AD41 912D
that shit was nice but yo can you holla at me with a private message my nigga i wanna as you a question......1
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