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Old 08-17-04, 05:47 PM   #1
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Hypnotized-song. check it out, yo

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yea, don't hate, i do different stuff, and someone wanted me to write it, you kno who you be , so I did. Don't hate. Gonna be an audio song.

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Beat is called LOve type song, beat.


I didn't mean to do... the things that I did
Didn't want to hurt you, and on our love, put a lid
But I couldn't help, the feelings that I had
The joy that I felt, now makes me sad
Girl, believe me, my feelings are tru
Girl, it's plain to see... I still love you
But everytime I try to call, you won't pick up
Now the smile I used to have, won't stick tough
But I can't blame you, after all that I commited
Didn't stay tru, our love I jus forfeited
I left you jus like that. Threw our love out the window
Said I'd write back, but I never grabbed a pen, though
Deep down I hope you forgive, cuz I want you back
I'll head down where you live, and make it up in the sack
For you, I'll always fight, no matter what you say or do
When disaster strikes, I'll be there next to you (girl)

(chorus)
In the past... I made some mistakes
Snuck behind yo back, girl,to you, I acted fake
But while I was gone, I finally realized
That I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized
I never ever thought, that I'd miss you so much
But tryin' not to think of you, boo, was so tough
Your beauty's got me stunned, got me mesmerized
I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized


The next day I saw you, walkin' down the street
Wit a shirt that was blue, and high heels on yo feet
I ran so fast, jus to get to ya side
Felt like I had a mask, cuz when you looked, you had no smile
I tried to say somethin', but then you began to cry
That made me feel like nothin', deep down inside
I then asked you out, but you simply walked away
No words out of ya mouth, you jus left me there to stay
I suddenly felt weak, and my knees began to bend
I had the feeling, like my world was gonna end
But then you came back, and you said that you was sorry
I apologized to you, but you told me not to worry
I caught a tiny smile, shinin' from yo face
Lasted for a while, all in good taste
I then tried to talk, but you didn't care
You jus grabbed me by my neck, and kissed me right there

(chorus x2)
In the past... I made some mistakes
Snuck behind yo back, girl, to you, I acted fake
But while I was gone, I finally realized
That I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized
I never ever thought, that I'd miss you so much
But tryin' not to think of you, boo, was so tough
Your beauty's got me stunned, got me mesmerized
I love you so much, girl, you got me hypnotized

yea, uppin' for feedback. weerd. pc
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Old 08-17-04, 05:55 PM   #2
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i liked it it was cute
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Old 08-17-04, 10:29 PM   #3
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this was a nice drop man, i liked the chorus a lot, you could turn this into a song, it would be nice, your a good writer, nice shit,keep it up....
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Old 08-17-04, 10:49 PM   #4
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haha thanks, and yea, it's gonna be an audio. Jus don't have time this week to do it, cuz of b-ball camp. uppin
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Old 08-18-04, 12:41 AM   #5
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lol ya that was pimped will pear lol nice saying cute but ya spul hit some more open mics i like yer shit man how did you and triple n and phenom make that song blazin do you live in the same city?
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Old 08-18-04, 12:41 AM   #6
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yer spul right?
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Old 08-18-04, 07:33 AM   #7
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yea, I'm SPuL. And nah we ain't from same City. I'm from Mass, Triple from NY, and Vendetta from western Canada, I think
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Old 08-18-04, 01:36 PM   #8
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how you record that song then? lol thats confusing
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Old 08-18-04, 01:46 PM   #10
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dope is vendetta lives close to me later when im better and got mys tudio i could go see him lol j/k but maybe idk
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Old 08-18-04, 06:07 PM   #11
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how you record that song then? lol thats confusing

yea, we recorded vocals and sent it to Vendetta. And Vendetta fucked up my flow. figures. But yea, the vcersion where my flow is right is on my soundclick, but the quality sucks cuz I'm usin' a shitty mic, like 4.38 or somethin' like that.
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Old 08-18-04, 11:31 PM   #12
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uppin...
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yea dope shit man 7/10 vocab hit me and what will a pear said it was cute lol
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aiight, thnks for feedback, y'all. uppin...
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Old 08-19-04, 09:04 AM   #15
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that shit was nice but yo can you holla at me with a private message my nigga i wanna as you a question......1
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