I’ll scare you away with my harder punchlines/
every time we battle you run away without a chance to shine/.
you diddent even get yer chance to spit yer line/
and people said i shot you up like i was the fastest nine/.
you think yer guns are blazin well let me tell you somethin you aint amazin/
i caught you starying at me cuz of the way i was phrasen/.
i made you roll up like a tiny raisen cuz of the way i was phrasen/
dont let me catch you glazen that takes it off topic you crack feind dazen/.
my hard punchlines will make you sqeual cuz you kno im for real/
so now you kno my shits the real muh fucken deal/.
my puches are crazy cuz i burned you down like i was some hot flames/
my power is like i was as strong as lebron james/.
you can call me mr punchlines cuz thats the way i go down/
you think you can shoot me up cuz im in yer town/.
i spit the truth so go ahead and put me in the booth/
cuz you kno that im the one thats still so youth/.
everytime you see me ill be in the booth spitin out harder nouns/
about you and who you hang out with cuz all yer freinds are clowns/.
you think yer the one that can hit it up and you think yer the shit/
but cant even fit into your own crew so im the one who will make you quit/.
so front me down ill be the first one to make you submit/
my punches make you run away as fast as a commit/.

the beat i used was realest niggas and if you guys like it ill put it on audio please get some real rappers on this thanks

U P P I N only vote on this if you got 500 post or more

i dont know how you saying put reall rappers you 14 when didi you start rappin when you was 8....talking about barney and lamb chops playalong lil nigga(lOl)....you want real rappers read my shit marv j that gifted cat and us OGs you young cats aint got shit yall just stick in school and stay writeing poetry homo dont talk real cuz you aint gotting real in your life than your home work lil mans no beef and i aint talking shit im just saying dont talk like your sick....im on my 3rd mixtape step up you know what i mean this is just practice for me youngin.....cuz its simple as this.........

you and your team yall the type to strap up last//
call yous a lil dude and then pat you on your ass//

but over all your flow was kool i can atleast listen to it if it was on wax.......1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

man to be honest i never liked yer stuff you were kinda crappy lol for older then me im 14 and im better then you so dont think yer the baller i dont think i am but im better for punches so ya peace

plus you gotta read the whole thing not just the rhymes i battle people in my city and there 17 16 and im htting them hard with my punches i battle them at like fairs n shit and i win lots of money lol so dont tell me im saying to much i realy battle people in real life and theres none you can say about that is there?

dawg you dont want the punches to come out tiys r us kid
i dont called you out player you aint re4ady and you defently dont want it

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

anytime you want it lil nigga you let me know and ill eat chu up just for fun and thats on dawgs and you know everything you type up on posts you LOL a real lot like shits a game you look at my right arm you'll know shits not a game i dont got shot in my arm on some dumb shit and 3 months lata i got a tatoo that says right around "Its Not A Game".....so keep thatin your head lil nigga......so anytime you readdy to get your shit throttled and embarssed drop a verse and ill drop mines and let me see if you got punches like rocky....but i already know your flows dead sloppy so w/e its on you you can ruin your rep on this site for all i cane me i dont give a fuck about my rep on this site im here to just drop some shit to keep my mind on a steady pase this shit aint paying me nuttin trust me.......1

__________________
hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1

k listen i want some peopel to give me feedback not bull shit and start beef ge tthe fuck outta here or ill report all fo you!

k listen ive been rapping for not even 1 month shut up ok! you dont kno anything lil tips yer a wannabe you talk like yer a gangsta goof go live n the hood you'll get bitched out.

not good punchlines now listen up yall can ignore me but I do my thing

you have no marks from battle heart don't rattle victory like wild soldiers
your file folders are closed for edits shitty by a pathetic committee your style like bolders just falling down to the ground and still can't throw rocks or flow hot

no man its a song not a diss ok so there isnt realy punches in it im rapin about how i can give good punches not im dissing you its just a song about im good at punch alright...1 no hate

U P P I N lets get some real guys in here come on im hurtin i need to kno if this song sould be fixed or what?

U P P I N come on

yea, the flow on this is pretty nice. The punches were aiight. But if you freestyled it, I guess it's ok. But yea, your rhmyin' words are too basic, you kno what I mean? Like try makin' the rhymin' words more complex. like look for bigger words that mean the same thing and stuff like that. Also, a good place to find rhymin' words is www.rhymezone.com
Yea, but overall, it was a nice drop. 7/10 keep droppin', man