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08-21-04, 03:40 AM | #1 | |||||||
Evol Grafix
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Yo heres my first open mic and i would like some honest feedback.. its a collab wit me my bro and my unks gurl
ill put tha rest in some otha time this is my first verse and my unks gurlz(nina) verse tell me wat u think (ME) Now spread tha word I got them bricks on dem dead end streetz And watch them jump out boyz Cuz they rollin 10 deep// creep crawlin tha night Yall no tha deal// on tha muffuckin hill We all strapped to kill Chill hittin licks in tha mud It never ceases Mad cuz they askin me for 3 dollar pieces How tha fuck im sposed to come up Off a shife move/ run up on a twenty and get ur ass an ice cube It aint nuttin y u bumpin in ur cutlass Just understand tha ruffness Never cut for da gutless Cause its do or die// u ask who am I An A-town heartbreaker ever since jr high Eye of tha public Tha black be a suspect So tha streetz taught me to be loveless Causin ruckus in a dope feind bucket My 2 favorite subjects duck its and fuck its ChorusME) Tha night shift// young hustlas workin grave yards My nine be// beside me// tonite we// work tha nite shift (NINA) Its yo midnight mistress//playa name pimptress I keep it krunk handle up my business Queen of tha dick// fiend for my shit Im sumthin korrupt 16 in my clip bout to blow up Puff black and milds U cant cramp my style Playa hatin bitches make me crack a smile Tonite we worldwide// my nina nigga sounds like tha fourth of july ,uthafuckas die Daddy streetz wanna marry ya// then bury ya Nina Ross Mary jane Ms. Cocaine, the 3 devils daughters deep in tha dope game Tru G’s don’t change// close range left ya boy wit no brainz Street zombies// takin out possies Dangerous hobbies just stop me ChorusNINA) Tha night shift// young hustlas workin grave yards My nine be// beside me// tonite we// work tha nite shift
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08-21-04, 03:42 AM | #2 | |||
Klassic
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its aight keep going at it, nice flow and word play.
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08-21-04, 03:46 AM | #3 | |||||||
Evol Grafix
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IP: 3822 7879
thanx letme get mo feedbak
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08-21-04, 05:24 AM | #4 | |||||||||
...Belong...
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
Um ya new so it's expected of ya not to have much knoledge of the text game but keep at it and u'll elevate keep it up
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08-21-04, 02:24 PM | #5 | |||||||
Evol Grafix
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IP: 3822 7879
man thanx but wat u mean text dogg i freestyle i usually dont rite but uppin gimme some feedback
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