RapVerse.com Community
 Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End RV Radio  

Go Back   RapVerse.com Community > The Cage > Battle Archives > Elevated Front Lines Battles
User Name
Password
FAQ Calendar Search Today's Posts Mark Forums Read

View Poll Results: Limited Edition Vs. Maku JaiiLiin
Maku JaiiLiin 5 71.43%
Limited Edition 2 28.57%
Voters: 7. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
Thread Tools Search this Thread Display Modes
Old 09-15-04, 11:16 AM   #1
L.E
L.E
 
L.E's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,000
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
IP:

Uppin this slept fuckin shit.......................
__________________
Soundclick
NEW Myspace
Send a message via AIM to L.E Send a message via MSN to L.E  
Old 09-15-04, 01:12 PM   #2
fluidmoon
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
 
fluidmoon's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,183
From: NEW YORK
IP:

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

wow, nice verse both of you.....
maku~your verse had nice flow and structure, it was more in depth then LE's verse, and had creative punches as well, a good personal about the thread, but the other could have been better, because it was on a crew member, not him, but ok, i liked the opener a lot, it was a nice starter and you came into this with some intensity, i especially liked the last 3 lines and the funny punch "you couldnt be a rider if bill gates cosigned a car for you", funny line......
LE~you verse had good flow as well, kind of shoet but you siad a lot in it, with the personals, nice closer too, but i vote for maku because of his content and descriptive vocab.....nice job both
__________________
"QUOD ME NUTRIT, ME DESTRUIT--AUT VINCERE AUT MORI"

O Y D

*FluidMusic*


*Poetic Scriptures Moderator*
 
Old 09-16-04, 12:12 PM   #3
L.E
L.E
 
L.E's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,000
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
IP:

Uppin ' this slept on fuckin shit...what the hell is wrong with you people?
__________________
Soundclick
NEW Myspace
Send a message via AIM to L.E Send a message via MSN to L.E  
Old 09-20-04, 12:25 PM   #4
L.E
L.E
 
L.E's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,000
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
IP:

Uppin' this fuckin shit...Why the hell has it been slept on so much!? Come on get it closed...
__________________
Soundclick
NEW Myspace
Send a message via AIM to L.E Send a message via MSN to L.E  
Old 09-22-04, 04:45 PM   #5
L.E
L.E
 
L.E's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,000
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
IP:

Uppin'.
__________________
Soundclick
NEW Myspace
Send a message via AIM to L.E Send a message via MSN to L.E  
Old 09-23-04, 01:57 PM   #6
L.E
L.E
 
L.E's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,000
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
IP:

Uppin' on this slept shit...for fuck sakes........
__________________
Soundclick
NEW Myspace
Send a message via AIM to L.E Send a message via MSN to L.E  
Old 09-29-04, 12:37 PM   #7
Lyriclesolja
I Create Dope Poetry For The Thinkers Of Tomarrow....I Am Lyriclesolja
 
Posts: 3,170
From: (210)
IP:

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

Aiight here we go......
.
Opener-Limited
Closer-Maku
Punches-Maku
Personals-Limited
Multies-Maku
Structure-Limited
Metas-Maku
Overall Best Verse-Maku
.
.aaight this is a very close battle as you can see....now i dont go for quanity over quality but it seemed like Maku had both of them......Limited if you would have came a lil harder you probly would have won.....Maku work on your structure it was relly the only thing wrong wit your verse..........oh and by the way i would like to see a round two between yall!!!!........V/maku
__________________
I Beat Up Asshole Fathers For Free





Quote:
Originally Posted by Indeph
Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.
Send a message via AIM to Lyriclesolja Send a message via MSN to Lyriclesolja  
Old 09-29-04, 08:33 PM   #8
KISI
atlas the vagabond
 
KISI's Avatar
 
Posts: 563
From: .:----:.
IP:

uppin 4 votes on this one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Old 09-30-04, 12:26 PM   #9
L.E
L.E
 
L.E's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,000
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
IP:

Werd, let's get this shit closed already...for fuck sakes people sleep on shit...
__________________
Soundclick
NEW Myspace
Send a message via AIM to L.E Send a message via MSN to L.E  
Old 09-30-04, 09:42 PM   #10
KISI
atlas the vagabond
 
KISI's Avatar
 
Posts: 563
From: .:----:.
IP:

uppin on this one
 
Old 10-01-04, 09:45 PM   #11
KISI
atlas the vagabond
 
KISI's Avatar
 
Posts: 563
From: .:----:.
IP:

uppin............................................. ........................
 
Old 10-06-04, 03:11 PM   #12
L.E
L.E
 
L.E's Avatar
 
Posts: 6,000
From: Edmonton, Alberta, Canada
IP:

Fuck, let's get this bitch closed..................
__________________
Soundclick
NEW Myspace
Send a message via AIM to L.E Send a message via MSN to L.E  
Old 10-12-04, 09:54 AM   #13
Dirty Nigga
E-Style, Bitch.
 
Posts: 6,728
IP:

Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

aight
close battle.......
real close...
limited ya had some hella nice wordplay, finisher didnt come strong, but overall ya flow an punches were pretty decent...
just needed that finisher to kill him off, but it didnt come...

maku, ya verse was solid as hell, opend it kinda well, an the finisher was tight! punches landed an the personals hit hard, for overral lyrical content maku got this battle...

no hate an return the fave
__________________

People Hate What They Can't Conquer
Send a message via MSN to Dirty Nigga  
Old 10-17-04, 01:44 AM   #14
D-ICED
COLD
 
Posts: 105
From: NEW YORK
This was feedback posted for Maku JaiiLiin

IP:

checkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk kkkkking
__________________
A.I
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyriclesolja

oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..

AIN'T THAT THE PURPOSE OF THE SITE?
 
Old 10-17-04, 02:26 AM   #15
schema
howdy
 
schema's Avatar
 
Posts: 2,962
From: SC
This was feedback posted for Limited Edition

IP:

checking votes for the EFL voting game...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=155573
__________________




"Frank White the menacin, chron chron's the medicine....
I got the lettuce and...
...you turn green like cucumber skin
Got the new hummer in the summer when I was a new comer then...
drugs and mac-10's...hugs from fake friends..."


Quote:
Originally Posted by Mad Dog
i'm not attracted to women...
Send a message via AIM to schema  
 


Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

vB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is Off
HTML code is Off
Forum Jump



All times are GMT -4. The time now is 02:04 AM.

Powered by vBulletin.
Copyright © 2000-2004 Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.